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DesertFennec
DesertFennecLv106mth
2024-10-31 01:51

It was an alright read. The story had some interesting parts, and the characters were decent. The pacing was fine and picked up as the revenge plot kicked in. I'm hoping for more kingdom-building elements in the future; personal strength is great, but I'd like to see more focus on his subordinates too

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Aurora22
Aurora22Author

You will have to wait for that. I need him to develop into a more capable and stronger person overall before he can attract vassals.

Samriddh_Singh
Samriddh_SinghLv4

Should I expect backstabbing? How cold are subordinates we are talking about ( loyalty to mc included ). Will it have romance ( drop it if you can or make it yaoi [ reason being authors can do great bromance but not straight romance so converting bromance into yaoi should be less of a risk ] )

Aurora22:You will have to wait for that. I need him to develop into a more capable and stronger person overall before he can attract vassals.
Metallica961
Metallica961Lv3

Yaoi/gay/straight harem?

Aurora22:You will have to wait for that. I need him to develop into a more capable and stronger person overall before he can attract vassals.
Harem_Seeker
Harem_SeekerLv14

is this novel have dragons or maybe a mech?

Aurora22:You will have to wait for that. I need him to develop into a more capable and stronger person overall before he can attract vassals.
Aurora22
Aurora22Author

No mechs. A dragon is interesting—I already had plans for wyverns, and dragons could enter the novel a bit later.

Harem_Seeker:is this novel have dragons or maybe a mech?
Harem_Seeker
Harem_SeekerLv14

that's cool to and maybe you can add drake to for siege beast mount hehe

Aurora22:No mechs. A dragon is interesting—I already had plans for wyverns, and dragons could enter the novel a bit later.
Dhaniel_Aquino_1769
Dhaniel_Aquino_1769Lv4

is there R18? or his counr helen included in his harem?

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