This is a unique story so far (chaper:11), and it has a lot of potential. The only problem is Harem; it always ruins the story, and the character looks more interested in taking photos than chasing girls; not the mention of the monsters he will fight it should effect him a bit, and well, being a curse too should effect his mind since he doesn't like sun. You can make his personality colder/darker, more curse-like, and when you think Yuta, you think Rika, so I find it uncomfortable with a harem. Im not saying not add romance, just dont make it harem. Even an OC is good as long as it's one FMC. NOTE: Im already concerned about it since MC already started taking pictures of Tsunade while she is bathing.(MC is 7 months old, btw.) Like, come on, I know it's his cheat, but it's weird when a normal Tsunade photo does not give him anything yet the bath one does. Is System a pervert or what?
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It's very easy to take a picture of a normal tsunade, but a naked tsunade... It's all about the difficulty. I'm not sure about the harem, it's just a possibility. If I decide to write harem in the future, it will annoy a lot of people that the harem tag didn't exist before. (I don't know about the future, but I think there is less than 40% chance of me writing harem).
why should you care what he says its your book your choice also harem fics are great depending on how you publish it or is jodionios harem fics trash think before you talk
how the hell is a 7 month old child able to do that?
yeah some are great but it really depends on the world DXD it's expected Naruto meh but if he's like a clan head and needs multiple child then yes
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author please make it a harem
you own the story bur i highly support harem
Please don't make the novel a harem.
okay what about clan secrets it's like the most precuious thing for a clan that doesn't have special eye powers how much reward would that give?
What’s in this fic that’s arcane related?
