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Does he even matter? He is not the MC. He can be dead for all I care, but I guess it's important for the plot, but I really hate the original Naruto's Sasuke obsession. Well, as long as the story focuses on Cid, I don't care who Sasuke pairs with.
Thank you for the chapter. It would be funny for Gotham citizens to watch themselves die on television or for a cloud chaser to rewatch his stream and see himself die even if he does not remember since it looks like the internet and videos are not affected. And what is he God of, btw?
Thank you for the chapter. Is this a translation? The reason I'm asking that is because of the use of words like time travel, hokage-world, uchiha classmate saving Damsal in distress, etc., which you will find in Chinese fics a lot. I don't have a problem with it being one, but you should say it in the synopsis since it's not a good look to use another's material and not credit them, and say it's your original story, not mention that it's not legal. Note: It just felt like a Chinese fic; if not, ignore this comment.
Thank you for the chapter. The world will notice the time anomaly, right? Since it only covered Gotham, that means even if the Gotham Citizens don't remember it, those who know because of satellites or even the internet would know not the mention that it would be funny for a Gotham kid to watch himself die on his own livestrem because rather than run, he tried to be immortal cameramen. And what is he God of, btw?
Thank you for the chapter. Is this a translation? The reason I'm asking that is because of the use of words like time travel, hokage-world, uchiha classmate saving Damsal in distress, etc., which you will find in Chinese fics a lot. I don't have a problem with it being one, but you should say it in the synopsis since it's not a good look to use another's material and not credit them, and say it's your original story, not mention that it's not legal. Note: It just felt like a Chinese fic; if not, ignore this comment.
Is this a Chinese fic? Only they use the word time travel, which does not make sense.
Kawarimi is not space time, Ninjutsu.
Thank you for the chapter. Somebody already said, but we can go beyond and make it so he is an outer god outside the influence of fate or omniscience, so Mother Box won't have knowledge about him. You can make him god of turth, essence, or singularity. Since his eyes already are kind of eldritch, you can add the effect of eyes appearing everywhere across the DC multiverse or around himself for dramatic effect when he gets seriues or serching for information or turth. TLDR, it would be cool if his new god divinity is some way about his eyes since they kind of evolved to a level that is just bleow omniscience.
Thank you for the chapter. BTW, is he going to still act like Konoha Shinobi? I mean, he never really cared about the villiage, and I was expecting Konoha to act since Miricale Danzo had not attacked yet. I think that after Konoha does something, he will leave, and after a while, all the 5 villiages are going to track and attack him because he will be like Hasirama; he will be too powerful to be left alone, and since he will be rouge, that makes him a wild card. Though it's just a theory, you can go differently after all.
It's too low; average IQ is 100. How is he that dumb? Isn't he the honored one? I thought that meant everything was easy for him—not just strength but learning creativity and IQ. I don't mean wisdom that comes with experience, but battleIQ, intelligence, etc. are important, and since he is the true honored one, he should be the best at whatever he does, and I don't mean godly, but better than every human, like he should be able to learn something and master it, like he is breathing since if somebody is better than him, he is not the honored one. btw, I'm not counting the otsutsuki since they are not humans.