mrhater

probably not but to increase he's favor ability enough where hed'dbe willing to help in the future

allies*

form*

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don't*

shouldn't it also allow him to use poison?

"I want to fight" she said again*

everything is good except the spelling and wording some are misspelled some or missing a word or is worded wrong. if those are fixed the story enjoyment would increase and it would get popular

I did not think you'd pick it up that fast*