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2024-10-20 22:01

A well-written story, one that manages to get me somewhat excited to read even if I have no idea about half of the sports terms. There's good potential here and I'd like to see a bit more of how the pressure to perform can bring out other traumas, especially since the MC is carrying some pretty significant traumatic events. A small primer on relevant football terms would be helpful, something at the beginning I could reference back to.

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Thanks for the review I'll put up some relevant football terms for those who are new to it

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