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Calling it forced drama ignores the fact that Enzo's medical condition has been the central conflict of the novel from the BEGINNING. The story was never about an overpowered system user steamrolling everyone. It was about a gifted player fighting a body that keeps breaking down. You're free to dislike that direction, but it's not the same thing as bad writing. If the story isn't for you, that's completely fine. I appreciate you giving it a try.
This obviously isn't for you then... Ciao
Reading 10 chapters of a story about a kid with a degenerative physical condition and then complaining about injuries is certainly a take. Lol And by the way, I specifically stated that the system won't make him instantly invincible. If he could ignore a lifelong medical condition because he has a system, that would be bad writing...
I've started updating bro
The timeline starts in 2015
I'm having health issues for now. Updates will begin when I'm strong enough to write.
Thank you for your honest feedback. I appreciate you taking the time to read my novel. You're right regarding the pacing and the focus on the Dutch league matches. My intention with the early chapters was indeed to explore the foundational stages of Benjamin's career in a more slow-paced and detailed manner, allowing readers to truly immerse themselves in his development. However, I understand that this might not appeal to everyone, and I hear your comments about the interest level in the Dutch league. Rest assured, the narrative pace is set to pick up significantly, and Benjamin's journey will soon take him to new challenges in the top European Leagues. I'll make the upcoming match chapters shorter to build pace.
Just a little drama before he gets another coaching job, which he already had as of chapter 55.