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2024-10-26 02:17

I'm taking liking this story, and though it's only the beginning, it keeps me wanting for more. Each chapter flows smoothly with things happening instead of getting bogged down with needless minute details or off-topic tangents. Also, enjoying the shifting POV's. The more streams he does, the easier it'll be to gauge where he approximately lives. I'm curious if he'll get a teleportation ability later or something to make it harder for people to locate him.

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SleazyPen
SleazyPenAuthor

Thank you very much for the review! Yeah, I'll do something I consider unique with the stream and his location and all that, so just stay tuned XD

PhavhEl
PhavhElLv4

Does he cut off all ties with Maya cause at this point I i haven't seen a reason to do so and I kinda wish they get back 2geda

joshua_obalaiye_0242
joshua_obalaiye_0242Lv14

I too think he and Maya should get back together.

PhavhEl:Does he cut off all ties with Maya cause at this point I i haven't seen a reason to do so and I kinda wish they get back 2geda
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