I have given this a read and I can certainly say that the book is very good and I would like to once again thank the translator for delivering us such an organised translation of this book...I could go on praising the translator of this book for years, he has done such good work.
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LIKEThe original is pretty good. The FML is Raven, though they only become an actual couple somewhat later into the story. Unfortunately, although it does have an ok ending, it was obviously cut short. Are you going to change anything, Mr. Translator, or is this going to be a pure translation?
I will try to add my tid bits.