I am a reader turned writer but mostly reader.
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aight, I'll change it.
much more beef from the original.
'He's a new guy but he should at least know what he is writing about' refers to the author of this fanfic, not toriyama. Just needed to clarify.
Ok, I'm sorry. I can not give this more than 2 stars because of how hard it is to understand what he is trying to the say. The quality is just not good. The story is going like shit, Bulla is overpowered so much that I doubt that you might have a shtick for... nothing. And trust me, Bulla is not that girl bro, she ain't jack shit. She got Ikari... while being calm? Ikari is a form achieved by immense rage. Bulla is also a bitch, a child, but a bitch. Fuck her. And the fight scenes are not well written, the power scaling can't even be compared with Toriyama but much worse even considering that Toriyama himself was bad at power scaling, no offense to him, he's the goat. He's a new guy but he should at least know what he is writing about. Again, I'm sorry but it's bad.
Alright G.
Daily?
They some brain-dead motherfuc-
and the storyline... it was cliche, the whole mystery, orphan, bounty hunter. I wanna improve it but every month, my preference resets.
i'm experimenting with A.I.