A solid 4. The writing is excellent. It’s too fluffy for me. The chapters are too short with little to no progress in each chapter. I think I read 10-20 chapters of them running initially. the best chapter is the first one. After that my hopes were dashed. The MC is weak, and is a Book bag for the ML literally she rides around on his back asking questions. I don’t see any value in her apocalyptic story so far. She’s cannon fodder that is JUST that. I haven’t even smelled a redeemtion for her. The monsters being unkillable (immortal) is too much. Grrrrr, creek, crash, chase blah blah blah. Shooting bullets for what reason it can’t die. And the MC is a weak link even getting bit by a rabbit. The story gets your hopes up to lead you no where. With lots of heart pumping and subtle flirting between the leads. For what?? He picked up a chick and has literally had to carry her the whole time. It’s not attractive whatsoever and the MC isn’t someone I admire. That’s what makes a good fantasy novel. Admiring the MC and being satisfied with their actions. Everything this chick has done so far have been down right silly and without the authors excellent penmanship I wouldn’t have made it past the first 20 chapters. Dear author I’d love to see your take on a generic trope. Your banter and world building is top tier. A strong but delicate female who’s quick on her feet beautiful resourceful and admirable. The male lead should actually need her or benefit from her being around other than for food. And some enemy that can be killed lol Rant over!
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hello Blkbarbie, thanks for the review and for MC being weak, i would agree with u on that....The book i envisioned writing was her being a strong female and i kind of spoiled the plot as i began to write... I'm trying to redo the whole story back and make her not so weak....hope u would be patient and come back when the story has been reversed and lastly thanks for giving my book a chance.
