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PumpkabooLv133mth
2024-11-09 10:51

I have mixed feelings about the characters. The MC and ML's interactions are interesting. He thinks very much like an apocalyptic survivor and I get where he is coming from. Aria, on the other hand, seems to lose her military and medical training after getting flicked into the future. Lots of training builds muscle memory, but it seems like her brain and body aren't in sync or her engrained instincts never kick in. Perhaps they will once she gets a moment to familiarize with her surroundings? I better read some more 🤔🤔

REBORN IN RUINS: Survival in an Apocalypse

saasxwrite
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98 Chs

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saasxwriteAuthor

Thank you for reading ♥️♥️ Aria is disorganized after all that and i think I would too because we are humans and the shock really made her disoriented but as the story progress she would become accumulated with her surroundings and once again thank u for reading ♥️♥️

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saasxwriteAuthor

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PumpkabooLv13

I understand what you mean, but I just thought her military discipline would make her different from ordinary people.

saasxwrite:Thank you for reading ♥️♥️ Aria is disorganized after all that and i think I would too because we are humans and the shock really made her disoriented but as the story progress she would become accumulated with her surroundings and once again thank u for reading ♥️♥️
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saasxwriteAuthor

true.

Pumpkaboo:I understand what you mean, but I just thought her military discipline would make her different from ordinary people.
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LovetobeLAZYLv4

As she comes from the military background n soldier , she would have her inbuilt instinct of military personnel, but it's very disappointing. Even though she appeared in the Apocalypse period and was disoriented, she should have the training and acculamed virtue as military instincts. I understand that this is a week to strong concept, but still, the FL character is disappointing. [img=nervous][img=update]

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saasxwriteAuthor

Hello everyone ~ As the author I would give the book a 5 star review, so this book is about an apocalypse but this isn't the classic zombies, this book apocalypse is filled with monsters (mutants), so at least read the first 10 chapters, i know my MC is a soldier but the firsts chapters made her look weak, read through the story and u won't be disappointed and lastly please vote, comment and send gifts. if you have any questions, say them. Bye~~~

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Spades_1Lv4

I think Aria and Ryan's journey is worth the time.. A different novel.. Though I'll be the first to accept that I expected more from our beloved military Dr. Putting aside Ryan's acclimatisation to the apocalyptic environment, I thought Aria will be more powerful even if she's not equal to Ryan...

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BlkbarbieLv15

Reveal spoiler

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MonneLv1

This story is WOW, the first chapter was really a good opening. am waiting for more chapters author pls, do update

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PhetiaLv4

The story is interesting, being action-packed from the get go. The characters face a different type of apocalypse, which is a nice welcome because nobody said that the apocalypse had to only involve zombies, right? There are some grammatical errors and the flow of the story is good. There were some areas that got me confused, but it's a fictional story lol. But on a serious note, I don't think it was wise to make a whole lot of noise when the enemy is most likely close by. Regardless of my review, go read the story and see if you like it.

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Winter_AzaleaLv14

Pretty good so far.

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SrenaudLv14

there is a good foundation and character development. The story progresses smoothly with good interaction.

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saitohajime2001Lv15

Give this book a try if you like this genre

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el1jAhLv3

. .. ... . ... . .

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VageeetaLv15

looks interesting, I just hope the female characters actually get to have their own space in the story

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