The idea is very good, very unique, but the author is simplifying, speeding up and destroying everything quickly. The system is so important that until chapter 7, more than 60% of the general power (individual, subordinates, etc.) of the MC has direct interference from the system. There is a huge simplification of the plot, to the point that Hiruzen's genin team (the Sannin) does not appear, and Tsunade was at least 3 years old when Hashirama was still alive, if you count the years until Tobirama's death she should be at least 6... Apart from other problems such as the lack of dialogue and difficulties for the MC. Basically it's grind and time skip.

Good idea. Writing feels like AI Repeat slop most of the time. It’s very simplified with no real emotion that draws you into the characters. No world background with just mc pov of most of the time. Mc seems kind of weird and feel like his goal changes like every other chapter.

(Read up to 15) Writing quality: It fine in my opinion, just it’s irk how Danzo was replace by CN name after chap-3 and author didn’t made any correction to it Update stability:For now its stable, and hope it remains this way. Story development:It just a Kingdom building story where Mc has a system to assist him.(Its a turn on or of depends on whether you like how useful it is that made anything seem effortless.) And since it Konoha, we can tell it going to be breeze for him. So if you feel satisfy seeing huge change rather than waiting for it after multiple chapter, then read it. Character: Pretty one time where 98% focused on Hiruzen while other character, is less explored other than Danzo(it didn’t last long tho). World Background:It is too shallow in my opinion where plot revolves mostly on what MC is doing to improve the village Overall: If you fine/enjoy reading Power fantasy, then you wont have problem about it. If you are expecting any in depth emotional pack story here, then this is not for you in my opinion.

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Here is my late review I found this when it was around 20 chapters, but I’ve been too lazy to make a review so here it is the story in my opinion has really good kingdom building you’ve done very well with how you have written in the sentences and paragraphs. They’re very clean. And only problem I just see is that some of the characters seems it’s just that you didn’t really give them enough time in chapters to actually get a personality or their personality just seems hollow but other then That you’ve done a very good job with writing in the story can’t wait to see what new stories you’re gonna write.

Everything was fine until it happened chapter 105. It feels like the author just got tired of writing and went to drain the story.

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Very good, the story feels very alive. easy to imagine all the scenes that happen in the story, thank you 🤌🏻 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

its a decent novel of youre looking for something to read while waiting for other novels to update. The story is also different from other novels amd brings us away from common scenarios with uchiha senju uzumaki BS. kinda hate that danzo is still running around creating instability while the MC has the power to just stop it. overall give it a try.