The idea is very good, very unique, but the author is simplifying, speeding up and destroying everything quickly. The system is so important that until chapter 7, more than 60% of the general power (individual, subordinates, etc.) of the MC has direct interference from the system. There is a huge simplification of the plot, to the point that Hiruzen's genin team (the Sannin) does not appear, and Tsunade was at least 3 years old when Hashirama was still alive, if you count the years until Tobirama's death she should be at least 6... Apart from other problems such as the lack of dialogue and difficulties for the MC. Basically it's grind and time skip.
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It was chapter 25 and almost nothing changed... This story could be a masterpiece, top 10 or 20 in power stones in the fanfiction section, but for that the plot must be something more, with less simplifications and more complexity, and more logical sense.
DarkKnight32:You should read more chapters
88, not 77.
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DeejaeSutherland:88, not 77.image
