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Pengamat_Ketiga
Pengamat_KetigaLv115mth
2024-10-31 21:49

good translation, this is not only well done but also well edited... for example in the first chapter when the system first came and MC asked for limitless and six eyes which MC actually didn't ask for that, MC asked for pangu blood (god) but the translator changed it to something that most people in different countries can understand.... and for the storyline, I'm quite disappointed with the original author, even though I quite like other works from this author (btth: Element god)..... the beginning of the story is still very good, but then the check in system starts to mess up, this system gives a sacred power as strong as Haotian out of thin air and integrates it as if it had existed thousands of years ago and it is 100% loyal to the mc. then the system gives a summoning card which finally summons hai bodong from btth whose brain was brainwashed by the system to be very loyal to the mc..... I don't like the storyline but that doesn't mean the interaction between the characters is bad, actually this is quite good compared to other Chinese fanfics

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HollyRisk
HollyRiskLv15

I don't understand the language in the picture but the fact you open webnovel in browser using a phone triggers me a bit ngl xd

Pengamat_Ketiga
Pengamat_KetigaLv11

This is a comfort factor.... I am more comfortable scrolling in a browser because it is smoother, not because of lag, but webnovel does not provide a sensitivity feature for scrolling... besides, I often read fanfiction, which sometimes I don't know the appearance and shape of the side characters. The browser feature makes it easier for me to search for character images, so I think the browser is better than the direct application.

HollyRisk:I don't understand the language in the picture but the fact you open webnovel in browser using a phone triggers me a bit ngl xd
HollyRisk
HollyRiskLv15

fair enough, I tried using browser long ago but it was beyond garbage due to lags and screen loading. it was really awful

Salmon_El_Solomon
Salmon_El_SolomonLv3

that was resolved a long time ago xd, it was almost at the same time when they shut down the offline translator

HollyRisk:fair enough, I tried using browser long ago but it was beyond garbage due to lags and screen loading. it was really awful
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