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2024-11-08 21:08

I've read till chapter 39 before I couldn't take it anymore. The plot holes in this fanfic are too big to ignore, many times mid chapter the direction suddenly change without any warning nor context. This is more noticeable between one chapter to another, chapter X can end about a certain subject and then chapter Y begins on another subject altogether as if a few paragraphs were missing from the new chapter. The system of the MC also changes all the time with his points always decreasing and increasing without any pattern, though I'm not really surprised since this is a Chinese fanfic after all and they're notoriously known to be bad at keeping track of system points... The translation also was done somewhat okay but with plenty of mistakes here and there.

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