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EroFanLv424d
2025-01-24 11:43

i like R18, this would have been fun to read actually, its just that, it was back to back seggs after every other chapters. seggs is so frequent that it got old fast, it got bland and redundant, seggs chapters are even way too long and too many unnecessary details. i quote, "unnecessary details". long seggs scenes are okay as long as they are not too frequent, but man, its there after every 2 or 3 chapters. you wont get any sense of satisfaction once MC lay with the girl because the build up and the process leading to them sleeping together was quite lacking. in fact, it was really lacking and not just quite. author ought to know that seggs should be the end game after a satisfying process leading to it, its like the reward for the work you put yourself through, not that im saying women are objects or trophies, okay? im saying the SEGGS should be viewed as the reward after a process. the process leading to the rewards is the most important part not the reward itself(seggs). i got a lot more to say but its exhausting to type or even think on how I should express my thoughts properly in a paragraph. anyway, good work, it was fun untill it was not

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Happiness_Is_BlissAuthor

Lol this is an erotica !! Tho story develops later on after 70th chaps !

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