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OnlyCanReadLv44mth
2024-10-22 13:25

I don't know how it got so low in the ratings. Most of the ratings are clearly made by dumb and inmature readers, sorry, not sorry. At least be honest when making a review, stability updates, story development and writing quality is (in my opinion) of the best you'll ever find in the fanfic section, A story that's not rushed and neither is too slow paced (like EPIC, Eins more famous ff) and has a Vhan that gets annoyed when thinking of sharing his partners (something the EPIC vhan didn't really care about, or at least by what I remember) Vhan, as allways, has interesting powers, his relationships and their development, although rushed, feels kinda natural. Some of ya'll are expecting them to fall in love and hate every other male, Like, a lot of the things that happen that make the reader weirded out, are things that vhan clearly doesnt like as well, like Rias sleeping naked with Issei, something that was clearly a problem for vhan and helped to mature the relationship for whats alright and whats not. Remember, she didn't really care and didn't see it as a problem, she's even sharing her boyfriend with other girls, and even wanted it (with her peerage), why would she think it would be a problem for her to just sleep naked with a subordinate to heal him? If you're a reader, try to understand characters other than the Mc, remember; you're the reader, not the Mc.

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WruthorLv2

Yep the author is just based af.

omnipotenceLv13

you are something else...wow I can't believe I read that

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Ok being honest it's far from the worst thing to read on webnovel. But it's a sequel to epic which means I've gone into this looking for the same feelings I got in the first chapters of epic which was full of cool powers and great fights, before dropping into a 50/50 smut/story mix after chapter 100ish from memory which is where my interest became a lot more lacklustre. Now trying not to spoil much, the outright lemons are dialed back about 80% or more but that's just them being replaced by fade to blacks and such, as a trade off vahn has already got an expansive group gunning for his bed in the first 20 chapters and it just gets worse from there. The powers are much less creatively shown as of this point in the story, there's not a whole lot of true developmental struggle for vahn in the slightest, not a single fight that I can even remember so far (if they've even been written out in favour of the fic being packed for of honestly awful romance) unlike a number I can still recall from the original to this day (e.g. the solo Rex fight). I'm tempted to mark this as spoiler purely because the plot so far is vahn walks into a room/area, flirting/foreplay ensues, gloss over anything else plausibly interesting and onto the next scene. It's rather disappointing from a writer where I've seen the heights they started from and was genuinely interested to see that quality come back but I haven't seen it yet. I'll keep reading as long as the flicker of hope I have lasts but I do not recommend this at all for people looking for a halfway creative or interesting fanfic cause I can no longer trust that you would find it.

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