It's a great Harry Potter fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too... It interesting to see MC/Eisen became a professor/teacher in Hogwarts.. But why Astronomy?? Muggle Studies is more good choice.. First, before Quirrell is become DADA teacher that year he's a Muggle Studies, so he could be a Muggle Studies without change other teachers.. Second, he's muggle before so he can teach Hogwarts student about muggle better.. I like that MC/Eisen got a cheat/system.. But maybe you should explain better how the system work author san.. And it so bad that he only get 1 Miracle Traits each year,, maybe give him another way to get it (so automaticly he can get 1 each year, but he can get more by doing/reach something?)) Love your story.. Keep up the great job author san 😁👍👍😍😍😍

je ne vais pas détaillé mon avis ma note en dit assez, je salut le travail effectué mais j aimerais beaucoup avoir le comparatif avec le mtl s il vous plait chère auteur/traducteur ( french)

Ai slop, plot makes no sense. System is something I haven’t seen before though which was cool

nothing coherent, he gets involved as a teacher without having the credentials or the level, he thinks that by knowing 3 spells in a year he already did it

the story doesn't follow the world logic itself, characters aren't speaking they way they suppose too and most are telling rather than showing.

It's hard to enjoy this when almost every minute you read something wrong. The author clearly didn't read the books and I even doubt he understood the movie. Good translation though.

This story seems great so far from what I've read, I am very worried that you might not continue updating. Please don't drop.

I have only just started this book,however, it is detailed and consistent and proving to be a nice read.

I enjoy the story so far and think is has promise as it has an interesting premise some of the concepts in the story don't make sense as I don't see a professor of Hogwarts with no NEWT or OWL exams ever being taken getting hired. Also him being able to convert so much pounds into Galleons is a bit far fetched as if you could convert them like that you would find wizards zapping muggles for cash left and right. I do see quite a bit of author forced plots that make the story loose some of its allure but I am willing to accept it so far and find the story enjoyable enough to look past.

Great job of the authors .It’s very good history ,different from other fanfiction.Original history and different system .I want to read more .