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Rizki_CaturiantoLv14mth
2024-10-17 07:46

It's a great Harry Potter fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too... It interesting to see MC/Eisen became a professor/teacher in Hogwarts.. But why Astronomy?? Muggle Studies is more good choice.. First, before Quirrell is become DADA teacher that year he's a Muggle Studies, so he could be a Muggle Studies without change other teachers.. Second, he's muggle before so he can teach Hogwarts student about muggle better.. I like that MC/Eisen got a cheat/system.. But maybe you should explain better how the system work author san.. And it so bad that he only get 1 Miracle Traits each year,, maybe give him another way to get it (so automaticly he can get 1 each year, but he can get more by doing/reach something?)) Love your story.. Keep up the great job author san 😁👍👍😍😍😍

Hogwarts Professor

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zen_gardenLv4

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. 😁

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Florian_VentreLv3

je ne vais pas détaillé mon avis ma note en dit assez, je salut le travail effectué mais j aimerais beaucoup avoir le comparatif avec le mtl s il vous plait chère auteur/traducteur ( french)

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Kil0Lv4

Ai slop, plot makes no sense. System is something I haven’t seen before though which was cool

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greencrossLv10

nothing coherent, he gets involved as a teacher without having the credentials or the level, he thinks that by knowing 3 spells in a year he already did it

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Martial_PursuitLv4

the story doesn't follow the world logic itself, characters aren't speaking they way they suppose too and most are telling rather than showing.

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Vetr_WinterLv3

This story seems great so far from what I've read, I am very worried that you might not continue updating. Please don't drop.

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HumbuubLv4

It's hard to enjoy this when almost every minute you read something wrong. The author clearly didn't read the books and I even doubt he understood the movie. Good translation though.

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AtomicCrowLv15

I have only just started this book,however, it is detailed and consistent and proving to be a nice read.

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mickroLv14

I enjoy the story so far and think is has promise as it has an interesting premise some of the concepts in the story don't make sense as I don't see a professor of Hogwarts with no NEWT or OWL exams ever being taken getting hired. Also him being able to convert so much pounds into Galleons is a bit far fetched as if you could convert them like that you would find wizards zapping muggles for cash left and right. I do see quite a bit of author forced plots that make the story loose some of its allure but I am willing to accept it so far and find the story enjoyable enough to look past.

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Abdul_Salam_FASAMILv10

Great job of the authors .It’s very good history ,different from other fanfiction.Original history and different system .I want to read more .

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