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Suryaputra_Karna01
Suryaputra_Karna01Author6mth
2024-10-03 20:49

Hello Hello 👋 This is your Mighty Author-Sama here! I hope you all can enjoy this story of mine! It has many points to improve now and believe that is only possible with your interactions with me, because for every creator their work is perfection itself. So please support or criticise (Please be gentle hehe~) this book and enjoy this journey together. You can ask your question below! Thanks for reading😇

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Crow_0_0_
Crow_0_0_Lv4

Are you like you know gonna lock the chapters? 🥲

Suryaputra_Karna01
Suryaputra_Karna01Author

After 40 chapters

Crow_0_0_:Are you like you know gonna lock the chapters? 🥲
Crow_0_0_
Crow_0_0_Lv4

Suryaputra_Karna01:After 40 chapters
Ignatious_Peter_0099
Ignatious_Peter_0099Lv13

How many chapters will you update every week?

Suryaputra_Karna01
Suryaputra_Karna01Author

7/8 chapter per week😅

Ignatious_Peter_0099:How many chapters will you update every week?
Sakra95
Sakra95Lv2

Please don't lock😔

Suryaputra_Karna01:After 40 chapters
Suryaputra_Karna01
Suryaputra_Karna01Author

That I can’t do, As I am unemployed and writing is the only talent I have and the way to earn. I hope you all understand me.🥲

Sakra95:Please don't lock😔
Tarun_Sandhu
Tarun_SandhuLv4

Huge fan from india big brother. I have read all your novels and they are superb. I have also left the quality of writing and the grammar visibly get better. Great work done and good luck in future endeavours

Suryaputra_Karna01
Suryaputra_Karna01Author

Thanks bro 👊

Tarun_Sandhu:Huge fan from india big brother. I have read all your novels and they are superb. I have also left the quality of writing and the grammar visibly get better. Great work done and good luck in future endeavours
Afonso_Aaron
Afonso_AaronLv5

hey there author can you tell me if the MC hárèm will have OCs or female characters from Mahabarata ?

Suryaputra_Karna01:Thanks bro 👊
Suryaputra_Karna01
Suryaputra_Karna01Author

Mix. From Mahabharata to other myths.

Afonso_Aaron:hey there author can you tell me if the MC hárèm will have OCs or female characters from Mahabarata ?
ANANTAVIJAYA1961
ANANTAVIJAYA1961Lv4

You Ruined Mahabharata for me.

Suryaputra_Karna01
Suryaputra_Karna01Author

How so bro?

ANANTAVIJAYA1961:You Ruined Mahabharata for me.
Other Reviews
SPSD
SPSDLv4

Let me go over one by one. Writing Quality had become great. I read and reviewed one of the author's previous books and from there, his writing quality has jumped way higher. There are no Grammer mistakes, at least none I could catch. There is a bit too much exposition sometimes, like explaining the customs of the land and their significance along with describing the reactions of the supporting main leads a bit too extensively. The first is needed in all respects lest the readers feel alienated but the latter could have been toned down just a bit, but that's just my opinion. Story Development so far is great. The author really catches your attention and doesn't let go. me, personally, I didn't like the addition of the harem from Greek mythology but that's just my personal preference. I do feel that it was revealed too soon, but then again, revealing it too late might have led to the readers growing attached to Draupadi only. Characters are all dynamic and serve their own purpose. Especially the character of Krishna was so beautifully added. I do have some bias about the way the author underlines the Dynamic between the Kauravas and the Pandavas though. In a lot of literary and TV media, you always see the authors or the directors take a side and support a particular group and the author does the same and supports the Kauravas. But there stands to reason that no one in the Mahabharata is actually a good character. They're certainly not bad as they are followers of Dharma, but they are evil in a way that does not violate the Dharma of that age and that has been beautifully underlined in the original Epic. But then again, these are all creative choices and the author writes the characters beautifully. Update Stablility is great. World Background instantly gets a five star since the work it's trying to adapt is so expansive and complex by itself. it can make way for a lot of interesting philosophical and narrative moments. and the existence of other myths only aids to that. Wish you well author! keep writing!

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