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DaoistD3chby
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2024-10-03 20:21

this is peak author just don't drop it you know

That Time I Got Reincarnated With Gacha System In Mahabharata

Suryaputra_Karna01
4.7
85 Chs

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Suryaputra_Karna01
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Don't worry, I won't. Just keep supporting me and comment on your thoughts to keep me motivated. That's all I need.😁

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Suryaputra_Karna01
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Hello Hello 👋 This is your Mighty Author-Sama here! I hope you all can enjoy this story of mine! It has many points to improve now and believe that is only possible with your interactions with me, because for every creator their work is perfection itself. So please support or criticise (Please be gentle hehe~) this book and enjoy this journey together. You can ask your question below! Thanks for reading😇

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Ayush_Saini_5568
Ayush_Saini_5568Lv3

just 4 ch and I am hooked to this story keep it up author

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Junghkook_21
Junghkook_21Lv4

Good ,very good.I am rooting for you brother.May your story reach great heights😁

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DaoistNDDZHu
DaoistNDDZHuLv4

please continue and don't drop it 🙏 there are not many Mahabharata story

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SPSD
SPSDLv4

Let me go over one by one. Writing Quality had become great. I read and reviewed one of the author's previous books and from there, his writing quality has jumped way higher. There are no Grammer mistakes, at least none I could catch. There is a bit too much exposition sometimes, like explaining the customs of the land and their significance along with describing the reactions of the supporting main leads a bit too extensively. The first is needed in all respects lest the readers feel alienated but the latter could have been toned down just a bit, but that's just my opinion. Story Development so far is great. The author really catches your attention and doesn't let go. me, personally, I didn't like the addition of the harem from Greek mythology but that's just my personal preference. I do feel that it was revealed too soon, but then again, revealing it too late might have led to the readers growing attached to Draupadi only. Characters are all dynamic and serve their own purpose. Especially the character of Krishna was so beautifully added. I do have some bias about the way the author underlines the Dynamic between the Kauravas and the Pandavas though. In a lot of literary and TV media, you always see the authors or the directors take a side and support a particular group and the author does the same and supports the Kauravas. But there stands to reason that no one in the Mahabharata is actually a good character. They're certainly not bad as they are followers of Dharma, but they are evil in a way that does not violate the Dharma of that age and that has been beautifully underlined in the original Epic. But then again, these are all creative choices and the author writes the characters beautifully. Update Stablility is great. World Background instantly gets a five star since the work it's trying to adapt is so expansive and complex by itself. it can make way for a lot of interesting philosophical and narrative moments. and the existence of other myths only aids to that. Wish you well author! keep writing!

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Jj_Yy_1147
Jj_Yy_1147Lv10

nice....................................

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Ayush_Saini_3831
Ayush_Saini_3831Lv4

this is some good stuff author i am liking it so far

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ORIGINofALL
ORIGINofALLLv4

I already read his other book and gonna say they are master piece in their own way so this book is. Hope author can increase the upload more chapters like 5 chapters per week

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Ayush_Saini_1914
Ayush_Saini_1914Lv13

good more............................mmm

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Just_act_lazy
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in my library of all my webnovel IDs nice...

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