The story itself is great. It’s development and the MC’s character are progressing well. It feel unique and, overall, it’s an entertaining read. My only ick (not a major one and very personal one) is the overly descriptive writing style. I’m not sure if it’s due to potentially using GPT to assist in writing (or translating) the chapters or maybe that’s just how the author writes his thing. It results in moments where the author repeats himself when describing the MC’s thought-process or feelings and the cause of them at that moments in time in some of the earlier chapters. Not often though, but they are present. Again, it’s not a big deal and totally my opinion, but just sayin’. In conclusion, a good read.
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