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2024-10-19 20:46

Mcs fruit needs to be more explained it can’t just be a “dragon” fruit. And the pocket dimension ability just doesn’t fit with a zoan fruit

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Ayoub_AMZ
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Thanks for reading. As for the MC's fruit before he escapes, he doesn't want to draw too much attention to himself, which is why he didn't even transform into his full beast form. and after escaping, we will know more about his fruit. As for the pocket dimension thing, he has spatial manipulation abilities. You said it doesn’t fit with a zoan fruit, but his fruit is not a normal Zoan; it's a mythical Zoan, and all the mythical Zoan fruits have special powers, like Kaido, who can control elements like wind and fire and probably thunder too, and he can create  "Flame Clouds" to fly, and Sengoku, who can create shock waves from the palm of his hand. Kurozumi Orochi's fruit, Yamata no Orochi, gives him eight lives instead of one, and Yamato, who can use the Ice element. And let's not even talk about how ridiculous and overpowered Luffy's fruit is. That is why Mythical Zoan-type Fruits, are even rarer than the Logias in the One Piece world.

Rando_M
Rando_MLv4

Thanks for the reply but i still disagree there is no lore in any dragon mythology where dragons could control space but I could obviously be wrong here. I’ll just have to continue reading your fanfic to finde out.

Ayoub_AMZ:Thanks for reading. As for the MC's fruit before he escapes, he doesn't want to draw too much attention to himself, which is why he didn't even transform into his full beast form. and after escaping, we will know more about his fruit. As for the pocket dimension thing, he has spatial manipulation abilities. You said it doesn’t fit with a zoan fruit, but his fruit is not a normal Zoan; it's a mythical Zoan, and all the mythical Zoan fruits have special powers, like Kaido, who can control elements like wind and fire and probably thunder too, and he can create  "Flame Clouds" to fly, and Sengoku, who can create shock waves from the palm of his hand. Kurozumi Orochi's fruit, Yamata no Orochi, gives him eight lives instead of one, and Yamato, who can use the Ice element. And let's not even talk about how ridiculous and overpowered Luffy's fruit is. That is why Mythical Zoan-type Fruits, are even rarer than the Logias in the One Piece world.
bythgr
bythgrLv14

Bro what lore this is a fanfic what are you on lol

Rando_M:Thanks for the reply but i still disagree there is no lore in any dragon mythology where dragons could control space but I could obviously be wrong here. I’ll just have to continue reading your fanfic to finde out.
Just_Jam
Just_JamLv4

as the other guy said, its a fanfic so you shouldn't take it too seriously and just enjoy

Rando_M:Thanks for the reply but i still disagree there is no lore in any dragon mythology where dragons could control space but I could obviously be wrong here. I’ll just have to continue reading your fanfic to finde out.
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

Who said that? Dragons who control time/space are very normal in many lores, we even have many other settings taking inspiration and creating they own version, a few examples like: dnd, wow, pathfinder, lol. And even some irl mythos like: Tiamat (Mesopotamian Mythology) or Rainbow Serpent from Aboriginal Australian mythology

Rando_M:Thanks for the reply but i still disagree there is no lore in any dragon mythology where dragons could control space but I could obviously be wrong here. I’ll just have to continue reading your fanfic to finde out.
C_balt
C_baltLv14

Palkia might disagree

Rando_M:Thanks for the reply but i still disagree there is no lore in any dragon mythology where dragons could control space but I could obviously be wrong here. I’ll just have to continue reading your fanfic to finde out.
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