So, this fic is one of the better Pokemon fics on this site. The characters are good, Pokemon interaction is peak on this fic and stuffs. There are some problems with the translation like how it's skipping a massive portion of fights or even chapters but meh, the fic itself is good. Another problem I found was in the later half of the story. It got repetive with the mc constantly moving regions, fights and wins and also, the psychology consultation part stopped coming which was REALLY bad and then canon stuffs started BEFORE original cast and that while in itself is not a problem, the same kept happening again and again ruining the story's originality. All in all its good. Better than most hxrny 8th grade syndrome fics on this site
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