i read 20 chapters but it was so filled with cliche it was impossible to read i get the mc has an op class and talent with the sword but it makes no logical sense to know how to parry and attack if he NEVER learned the classes are so unbalanced the fls class is horrible natalie's class is broken the mcs class feels wasted on him tbh he isn't dumb but is not better than average i give up others may enjoy it sometimew things make no sense at all it has had no real character exploration but that my fault cuz i only read 20 chapters bye
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This completely stupid review got 8 likes, which now prompts me to answer it and debunk it with facts. Putting aside the fact that you only read 20 chapters, you don't know a single thing about balance or logic. First of all, there's no cliche as far as I know. Maybe you don;t know the meaning of cliche or i don't know the cliche i put because i may not have read something like that. -- Second, No logical sense to know how to parry without training? This is false. MC has his talent and experience embedded into his spirit, his soul, even if he doesn't remember his past life's memories. And Even if not, someone talented like him can still learn parry on his own EASILY. His talent in sword is unparalleled and i have portrayed it pretty well with creativity (You wouldn't know since you stopped at 20, just as he got the sword in his hand and started experiencing the high of his mind as he explored and made the sword his own to explore.) Just like how Mozart knew what to do when he saw the piano and started playing, and how he made whole genres of piano music and became pioneer of it, MC's talent in sword is that scary, and it's portrayed well. --Lily's class is horrible? Lol. it's an S-rank class that gives her invisibility, gives her a literal 6th sense with extra clarity as passive skill, has a powerful attack skill, Can buff her Perception and Focus with a skill!, not to mention other primary skills she got from level-up boon. (But this guy who read 20 chapters wouldn't know.) Anyway, She got 4 skills right off the bat, and class perk since its S-rank class. --Natalia's class is broken? 😂 Her class is B-rank Mirage Witch. She only got 3 skills, and no class perk. 1. Action Mirage: Copy an action/skill she sees, and replay it, but at lower effectiveness and overall power. 2. Mirage clone: Makes a clone of herself with 50% of her stats. She could only control either her body or clone one at a time, but she came to do both later. 3rd skill. Light Pebble: A light-elemental skill that deals low damage, but can blind target briefly if used properly. This guy: class is "broken" No it ain't broker. Everything is balanced. MC's class feels wasted on him? Yeah, you sure know everything after reading 20 chapters, and other reviews are just spouting bull sht, right? 😂 I give up. Please don't read this, it's not for you.
so u are telling me...his soul has muscle memory
I_Cook_Limitlessly:This completely stupid review got 8 likes, which now prompts me to answer it and debunk it with facts. Putting aside the fact that you only read 20 chapters, you don't know a single thing about balance or logic. First of all, there's no cliche as far as I know. Maybe you don;t know the meaning of cliche or i don't know the cliche i put because i may not have read something like that. -- Second, No logical sense to know how to parry without training? This is false. MC has his talent and experience embedded into his spirit, his soul, even if he doesn't remember his past life's memories. And Even if not, someone talented like him can still learn parry on his own EASILY. His talent in sword is unparalleled and i have portrayed it pretty well with creativity (You wouldn't know since you stopped at 20, just as he got the sword in his hand and started experiencing the high of his mind as he explored and made the sword his own to explore.) Just like how Mozart knew what to do when he saw the piano and started playing, and how he made whole genres of piano music and became pioneer of it, MC's talent in sword is that scary, and it's portrayed well. --Lily's class is horrible? Lol. it's an S-rank class that gives her invisibility, gives her a literal 6th sense with extra clarity as passive skill, has a powerful attack skill, Can buff her Perception and Focus with a skill!, not to mention other primary skills she got from level-up boon. (But this guy who read 20 chapters wouldn't know.) Anyway, She got 4 skills right off the bat, and class perk since its S-rank class. --Natalia's class is broken? 😂 Her class is B-rank Mirage Witch. She only got 3 skills, and no class perk. 1. Action Mirage: Copy an action/skill she sees, and replay it, but at lower effectiveness and overall power. 2. Mirage clone: Makes a clone of herself with 50% of her stats. She could only control either her body or clone one at a time, but she came to do both later. 3rd skill. Light Pebble: A light-elemental skill that deals low damage, but can blind target briefly if used properly. This guy: class is "broken" No it ain't broker. Everything is balanced. MC's class feels wasted on him? Yeah, you sure know everything after reading 20 chapters, and other reviews are just spouting bull sht, right? 😂 I give up. Please don't read this, it's not for you.
Memories are sealed but his experience seeps into him as wield the sword and his talent in sword remains same or rather even more blooming in this second life.
Christian_Lynch:so u are telling me...his soul has muscle memory
i legit said i understand i dont know alot because i only read 20 chapters but think natalie's skill is BALANCED bro ITS BROKEN if i remember correctly she can use it at 80% of the original bro and she can copy anything explain in what world is that balanced oh and the class perk i think yes that makes it a bit better and u will probably give the fl a broken skill better than natalie's later on but rn any skill she has has nothing on natalie
I_Cook_Limitlessly:This completely stupid review got 8 likes, which now prompts me to answer it and debunk it with facts. Putting aside the fact that you only read 20 chapters, you don't know a single thing about balance or logic. First of all, there's no cliche as far as I know. Maybe you don;t know the meaning of cliche or i don't know the cliche i put because i may not have read something like that. -- Second, No logical sense to know how to parry without training? This is false. MC has his talent and experience embedded into his spirit, his soul, even if he doesn't remember his past life's memories. And Even if not, someone talented like him can still learn parry on his own EASILY. His talent in sword is unparalleled and i have portrayed it pretty well with creativity (You wouldn't know since you stopped at 20, just as he got the sword in his hand and started experiencing the high of his mind as he explored and made the sword his own to explore.) Just like how Mozart knew what to do when he saw the piano and started playing, and how he made whole genres of piano music and became pioneer of it, MC's talent in sword is that scary, and it's portrayed well. --Lily's class is horrible? Lol. it's an S-rank class that gives her invisibility, gives her a literal 6th sense with extra clarity as passive skill, has a powerful attack skill, Can buff her Perception and Focus with a skill!, not to mention other primary skills she got from level-up boon. (But this guy who read 20 chapters wouldn't know.) Anyway, She got 4 skills right off the bat, and class perk since its S-rank class. --Natalia's class is broken? 😂 Her class is B-rank Mirage Witch. She only got 3 skills, and no class perk. 1. Action Mirage: Copy an action/skill she sees, and replay it, but at lower effectiveness and overall power. 2. Mirage clone: Makes a clone of herself with 50% of her stats. She could only control either her body or clone one at a time, but she came to do both later. 3rd skill. Light Pebble: A light-elemental skill that deals low damage, but can blind target briefly if used properly. This guy: class is "broken" No it ain't broker. Everything is balanced. MC's class feels wasted on him? Yeah, you sure know everything after reading 20 chapters, and other reviews are just spouting bull sht, right? 😂 I give up. Please don't read this, it's not for you.
the fl class is more for fighting monsters and people and natalie class is way more flexible a clone with 50% power is broken u can just hide ur body and use that clone to do everything
I_Cook_Limitlessly:This completely stupid review got 8 likes, which now prompts me to answer it and debunk it with facts. Putting aside the fact that you only read 20 chapters, you don't know a single thing about balance or logic. First of all, there's no cliche as far as I know. Maybe you don;t know the meaning of cliche or i don't know the cliche i put because i may not have read something like that. -- Second, No logical sense to know how to parry without training? This is false. MC has his talent and experience embedded into his spirit, his soul, even if he doesn't remember his past life's memories. And Even if not, someone talented like him can still learn parry on his own EASILY. His talent in sword is unparalleled and i have portrayed it pretty well with creativity (You wouldn't know since you stopped at 20, just as he got the sword in his hand and started experiencing the high of his mind as he explored and made the sword his own to explore.) Just like how Mozart knew what to do when he saw the piano and started playing, and how he made whole genres of piano music and became pioneer of it, MC's talent in sword is that scary, and it's portrayed well. --Lily's class is horrible? Lol. it's an S-rank class that gives her invisibility, gives her a literal 6th sense with extra clarity as passive skill, has a powerful attack skill, Can buff her Perception and Focus with a skill!, not to mention other primary skills she got from level-up boon. (But this guy who read 20 chapters wouldn't know.) Anyway, She got 4 skills right off the bat, and class perk since its S-rank class. --Natalia's class is broken? 😂 Her class is B-rank Mirage Witch. She only got 3 skills, and no class perk. 1. Action Mirage: Copy an action/skill she sees, and replay it, but at lower effectiveness and overall power. 2. Mirage clone: Makes a clone of herself with 50% of her stats. She could only control either her body or clone one at a time, but she came to do both later. 3rd skill. Light Pebble: A light-elemental skill that deals low damage, but can blind target briefly if used properly. This guy: class is "broken" No it ain't broker. Everything is balanced. MC's class feels wasted on him? Yeah, you sure know everything after reading 20 chapters, and other reviews are just spouting bull sht, right? 😂 I give up. Please don't read this, it's not for you.
light pebble IS what should be normal for them at this current moment they shouldn't have such broken skills but this is the story u writing where the cast is op
I_Cook_Limitlessly:This completely stupid review got 8 likes, which now prompts me to answer it and debunk it with facts. Putting aside the fact that you only read 20 chapters, you don't know a single thing about balance or logic. First of all, there's no cliche as far as I know. Maybe you don;t know the meaning of cliche or i don't know the cliche i put because i may not have read something like that. -- Second, No logical sense to know how to parry without training? This is false. MC has his talent and experience embedded into his spirit, his soul, even if he doesn't remember his past life's memories. And Even if not, someone talented like him can still learn parry on his own EASILY. His talent in sword is unparalleled and i have portrayed it pretty well with creativity (You wouldn't know since you stopped at 20, just as he got the sword in his hand and started experiencing the high of his mind as he explored and made the sword his own to explore.) Just like how Mozart knew what to do when he saw the piano and started playing, and how he made whole genres of piano music and became pioneer of it, MC's talent in sword is that scary, and it's portrayed well. --Lily's class is horrible? Lol. it's an S-rank class that gives her invisibility, gives her a literal 6th sense with extra clarity as passive skill, has a powerful attack skill, Can buff her Perception and Focus with a skill!, not to mention other primary skills she got from level-up boon. (But this guy who read 20 chapters wouldn't know.) Anyway, She got 4 skills right off the bat, and class perk since its S-rank class. --Natalia's class is broken? 😂 Her class is B-rank Mirage Witch. She only got 3 skills, and no class perk. 1. Action Mirage: Copy an action/skill she sees, and replay it, but at lower effectiveness and overall power. 2. Mirage clone: Makes a clone of herself with 50% of her stats. She could only control either her body or clone one at a time, but she came to do both later. 3rd skill. Light Pebble: A light-elemental skill that deals low damage, but can blind target briefly if used properly. This guy: class is "broken" No it ain't broker. Everything is balanced. MC's class feels wasted on him? Yeah, you sure know everything after reading 20 chapters, and other reviews are just spouting bull sht, right? 😂 I give up. Please don't read this, it's not for you.
i never said i know everything in truth some dude read 100s of chapters they probably know way more but either way this story is not for me 1.this mc seems like a dumbass ok no thats wrong more like he aint creative with his plans like everything he will do will be predictable to me this one is just a rant dont take me too serious
I_Cook_Limitlessly:This completely stupid review got 8 likes, which now prompts me to answer it and debunk it with facts. Putting aside the fact that you only read 20 chapters, you don't know a single thing about balance or logic. First of all, there's no cliche as far as I know. Maybe you don;t know the meaning of cliche or i don't know the cliche i put because i may not have read something like that. -- Second, No logical sense to know how to parry without training? This is false. MC has his talent and experience embedded into his spirit, his soul, even if he doesn't remember his past life's memories. And Even if not, someone talented like him can still learn parry on his own EASILY. His talent in sword is unparalleled and i have portrayed it pretty well with creativity (You wouldn't know since you stopped at 20, just as he got the sword in his hand and started experiencing the high of his mind as he explored and made the sword his own to explore.) Just like how Mozart knew what to do when he saw the piano and started playing, and how he made whole genres of piano music and became pioneer of it, MC's talent in sword is that scary, and it's portrayed well. --Lily's class is horrible? Lol. it's an S-rank class that gives her invisibility, gives her a literal 6th sense with extra clarity as passive skill, has a powerful attack skill, Can buff her Perception and Focus with a skill!, not to mention other primary skills she got from level-up boon. (But this guy who read 20 chapters wouldn't know.) Anyway, She got 4 skills right off the bat, and class perk since its S-rank class. --Natalia's class is broken? 😂 Her class is B-rank Mirage Witch. She only got 3 skills, and no class perk. 1. Action Mirage: Copy an action/skill she sees, and replay it, but at lower effectiveness and overall power. 2. Mirage clone: Makes a clone of herself with 50% of her stats. She could only control either her body or clone one at a time, but she came to do both later. 3rd skill. Light Pebble: A light-elemental skill that deals low damage, but can blind target briefly if used properly. This guy: class is "broken" No it ain't broker. Everything is balanced. MC's class feels wasted on him? Yeah, you sure know everything after reading 20 chapters, and other reviews are just spouting bull sht, right? 😂 I give up. Please don't read this, it's not for you.
mc's class is indeed wasted on him but also not cuz if he has the swordsman ship that u say he has it aint but also his class can be used in so many ways but if he gonna be running into the fight with a sword in hand that kinda gonna limit it when he could bomb a monsters base but whatever i stated my case
I_Cook_Limitlessly:This completely stupid review got 8 likes, which now prompts me to answer it and debunk it with facts. Putting aside the fact that you only read 20 chapters, you don't know a single thing about balance or logic. First of all, there's no cliche as far as I know. Maybe you don;t know the meaning of cliche or i don't know the cliche i put because i may not have read something like that. -- Second, No logical sense to know how to parry without training? This is false. MC has his talent and experience embedded into his spirit, his soul, even if he doesn't remember his past life's memories. And Even if not, someone talented like him can still learn parry on his own EASILY. His talent in sword is unparalleled and i have portrayed it pretty well with creativity (You wouldn't know since you stopped at 20, just as he got the sword in his hand and started experiencing the high of his mind as he explored and made the sword his own to explore.) Just like how Mozart knew what to do when he saw the piano and started playing, and how he made whole genres of piano music and became pioneer of it, MC's talent in sword is that scary, and it's portrayed well. --Lily's class is horrible? Lol. it's an S-rank class that gives her invisibility, gives her a literal 6th sense with extra clarity as passive skill, has a powerful attack skill, Can buff her Perception and Focus with a skill!, not to mention other primary skills she got from level-up boon. (But this guy who read 20 chapters wouldn't know.) Anyway, She got 4 skills right off the bat, and class perk since its S-rank class. --Natalia's class is broken? 😂 Her class is B-rank Mirage Witch. She only got 3 skills, and no class perk. 1. Action Mirage: Copy an action/skill she sees, and replay it, but at lower effectiveness and overall power. 2. Mirage clone: Makes a clone of herself with 50% of her stats. She could only control either her body or clone one at a time, but she came to do both later. 3rd skill. Light Pebble: A light-elemental skill that deals low damage, but can blind target briefly if used properly. This guy: class is "broken" No it ain't broker. Everything is balanced. MC's class feels wasted on him? Yeah, you sure know everything after reading 20 chapters, and other reviews are just spouting bull sht, right? 😂 I give up. Please don't read this, it's not for you.
Geez i was stupid to reply to you mr. Know everything.
Christian_Lynch:mc's class is indeed wasted on him but also not cuz if he has the swordsman ship that u say he has it aint but also his class can be used in so many ways but if he gonna be running into the fight with a sword in hand that kinda gonna limit it when he could bomb a monsters base but whatever i stated my case
I’m very speechless Mr. Know everything.
Christian_Lynch:i never said i know everything in truth some dude read 100s of chapters they probably know way more but either way this story is not for me 1.this mc seems like a dumbass ok no thats wrong more like he aint creative with his plans like everything he will do will be predictable to me this one is just a rant dont take me too serious
And yeah, forget that this book ever existed. Its not for you. You go find other books 👍
Christian_Lynch:mc's class is indeed wasted on him but also not cuz if he has the swordsman ship that u say he has it aint but also his class can be used in so many ways but if he gonna be running into the fight with a sword in hand that kinda gonna limit it when he could bomb a monsters base but whatever i stated my case
i legit said i dont know everything..
I_Cook_Limitlessly:Geez i was stupid to reply to you mr. Know everything.
