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2024-12-07 07:21

Review written at chapter 70. The world so far has a lot of fun and unique traits that set it apart from similar settings. The story is developing well. The MC doesn’t squander their unique abilities. You’ll find plenty of books with some kind of, MC exclusive, stat building method. Some go too far and pump the MC too much, some don’t utilize it at all. The author strikes a good balance of power scaling, where mc doesn’t become unrealisticly OP. A little sidebar: l appreciate the little comedic undercuts to otherwise serious moments. I only put a 4 star on character design because of the girlfriend. I don’t dislike quick relationships per say, but it does leave something to be desired for a slower burning relationship. To reiterate, I do like the female lead. The world background sets up some good mysteries that don’t have to take the main focus of every arc. Speaking of arcs, I really hope the tournament arc doesn’t get too drawn out

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PurpleDao
PurpleDaoLv14

I agree on the girlfriend point, thats actually been a big turn off for me since it ferls forced/unnaturally quick

StrawHatLuffy
StrawHatLuffyLv5

Dude, the MC is ridiculously OP, the items he gets are all OP, dude was moving at the speed of sound within the first 30 chapters. And yeah the forced relationship is also ridiculous. All in all, I wouldn't recommend this book to anyone. It's hard to endure the way he tells the girl everything - literally.

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