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MellowFellow
MellowFellowLv147mth
2024-10-09 22:44

I know your greatness, good grammar, nice plot, im happy for this new story. So don't drop it please. Like pretty please!

X-Force: Beyond Omega

UnknownMaster
4.7
146 Chs

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Death_to_all_2816
Death_to_all_2816Lv4

I've read and like your other stories so I have high hopes for this one

7mth
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UnknownMaster
UnknownMasterAuthor

I have approx 200 chs planned for now. Got the draft and all. So, no worries.

7mth
NO_YURI_000
NO_YURI_000Lv4

Yuri in harem?!

UnknownMaster:I have approx 200 chs planned for now. Got the draft and all. So, no worries.
7mth
UnknownMaster
UnknownMasterAuthor

No

NO_YURI_000:Yuri in harem?!
7mth
omiguh
omiguhLv4

What type of harem are we talking about? Is it the type of “you are invited, and you, you, you, you, and anyone else is with no character progression”? Or is more subtle with a new girl every 30-50 chapters but with character progression of the women? Because if it’s the first then I’m gonna have to pass

UnknownMaster:I have approx 200 chs planned for now. Got the draft and all. So, no worries.
7mth
UnknownMaster
UnknownMasterAuthor

All the girls I'll add will have their own mini arcs. As for how many? That I won't tell now.

omiguh:What type of harem are we talking about? Is it the type of “you are invited, and you, you, you, you, and anyone else is with no character progression”? Or is more subtle with a new girl every 30-50 chapters but with character progression of the women? Because if it’s the first then I’m gonna have to pass
7mth
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omiguh
omiguhLv4

More than five? Five too much for me

UnknownMaster:All the girls I'll add will have their own mini arcs. As for how many? That I won't tell now.
7mth
ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

Kayy looking forward to it but is he an simp or how would you have him?

UnknownMaster:All the girls I'll add will have their own mini arcs. As for how many? That I won't tell now.
7mth
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UnknownMaster
UnknownMasterAuthor

Author here with the usual 5 stars. Well, it's harem, no ntr, no yuri. Got a question feel free to ask. And let me know if there are any typos. Finally, have a bit of patience. The story has just began. You'll get your answers.

6mth

Matt_inman
Matt_inmanLv14

oh my God! what an amazing novel like seriously this one just made it into my top three of all time, I'm a huge fanfic nerd but I don't have anything to complain about I really enjoy OP characters so keep it rocking my friend and give me more more more. I can't wait keep up the hard work my friend God bless you.

5mth
Usiel
UsielLv13

Writing quality is perfect. I really do like how it goes. MC is a smart one not a naive idiot like most of the MCU fictions. He has 3 step process for ppl who like to stir trouble and i loved it. Not a psychopaths killing left and right. Good work author-san best of luck.

4mth
NunuXD
NunuXDLv12

The story is good and has potential, but from the 15 chapters that the novel have, 7 chapters are just him dating Jean or doing thing with her. I know the synopsis said that the novel will have harem, but with only Jean we already have just half of the plot, what will happen when he really have a harem? We will have 1 plot chapter and 10 chapters of him dating and interacting with the girls? Not even mentioning that this Jean is just an OC character with her powers and appearance, as her personality has nothing related to the real Jean Gray...

7mth
LastGod
LastGodLv5

this is really good, but it's got some stupid stuff from the comics i never liked. how can a tech stop the activation of a gene that gives powers that like saying ur phone can turn ur hair blue by pressing a button. it always made me roll my eyes when the government was able to stop mutants as powerful as Magneto with little effort. then again, i also never like that their was so many powerful mutants. If mutants are so rare as to be 1 in 1 million people but also 1 in 1million are alpha and 1 in 1 billion an omega then thier should be very few powerful alpha and VERY few omega.

6mth
NanoLOA
NanoLOALv4

Finally, I don’t know why people don’t use abilties like All For One more often. Gonna let this marinate for a while though.

6mth
Damian_Gold
Damian_GoldLv3

is he a hero, villain or anti hero..........................................................................................................................

7mth
Vitor_Lindo
Vitor_LindoLv12

Tanto potencial indo para o lixo ele tem o poder do All For One mas não usa que lixo pode pegar os poder de todos os mutantes mas não faz e que nem uma cópia ---- kkkkkk cada capítulo e uma agonia de ler vendo o protagonista tão lixo e pq ele tem meta-conhecimento das HQs dos mangas e dos filmes mas mesmo assim AFF decepções

6mth
DaoistFnrIrp
DaoistFnrIrpLv1

Muy buena historia Bro 👍 No puedo esperar para leer el próximo capítulo ...................................................................

7mth
ayoub_hadou
ayoub_hadouLv4

it's a marvel harem fanfiction with no Yuri so that's great . the story progression is good not too fast nor slow. the MC has great interaction with the rest of the cast with no hollow bonds. overall great work one of my favorites

4mth
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