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MellowFellow
MellowFellowLv143mth
2024-10-09 22:44

I know your greatness, good grammar, nice plot, im happy for this new story. So don't drop it please. Like pretty please!

X-Force: Beyond Omega

UnknownMaster
4.7
87 Chs

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Death_to_all_2816
Death_to_all_2816Lv4

I've read and like your other stories so I have high hopes for this one

3mth
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UnknownMaster
UnknownMasterAuthor

I have approx 200 chs planned for now. Got the draft and all. So, no worries.

3mth
NO_YURI_000
NO_YURI_000Lv4

Yuri in harem?!

UnknownMaster:I have approx 200 chs planned for now. Got the draft and all. So, no worries.
3mth
UnknownMaster
UnknownMasterAuthor

No

NO_YURI_000:Yuri in harem?!
3mth
omiguh
omiguhLv4

What type of harem are we talking about? Is it the type of “you are invited, and you, you, you, you, and anyone else is with no character progression”? Or is more subtle with a new girl every 30-50 chapters but with character progression of the women? Because if it’s the first then I’m gonna have to pass

UnknownMaster:I have approx 200 chs planned for now. Got the draft and all. So, no worries.
2mth
UnknownMaster
UnknownMasterAuthor

All the girls I'll add will have their own mini arcs. As for how many? That I won't tell now.

omiguh:What type of harem are we talking about? Is it the type of “you are invited, and you, you, you, you, and anyone else is with no character progression”? Or is more subtle with a new girl every 30-50 chapters but with character progression of the women? Because if it’s the first then I’m gonna have to pass
2mth
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omiguh
omiguhLv4

More than five? Five too much for me

UnknownMaster:All the girls I'll add will have their own mini arcs. As for how many? That I won't tell now.
2mth
ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

Kayy looking forward to it but is he an simp or how would you have him?

UnknownMaster:All the girls I'll add will have their own mini arcs. As for how many? That I won't tell now.
2mth
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UnknownMaster
UnknownMasterAuthor

Author here with the usual 5 stars. Well, it's harem, no ntr, no yuri. Got a question feel free to ask. And let me know if there are any typos. Finally, have a bit of patience. The story has just began. You'll get your answers.

2mth

NunuXD
NunuXDLv12

The story is good and has potential, but from the 15 chapters that the novel have, 7 chapters are just him dating Jean or doing thing with her. I know the synopsis said that the novel will have harem, but with only Jean we already have just half of the plot, what will happen when he really have a harem? We will have 1 plot chapter and 10 chapters of him dating and interacting with the girls? Not even mentioning that this Jean is just an OC character with her powers and appearance, as her personality has nothing related to the real Jean Gray...

2mth
LastGod
LastGodLv5

this is really good, but it's got some stupid stuff from the comics i never liked. how can a tech stop the activation of a gene that gives powers that like saying ur phone can turn ur hair blue by pressing a button. it always made me roll my eyes when the government was able to stop mutants as powerful as Magneto with little effort. then again, i also never like that their was so many powerful mutants. If mutants are so rare as to be 1 in 1 million people but also 1 in 1million are alpha and 1 in 1 billion an omega then thier should be very few powerful alpha and VERY few omega.

2mth
NanoLOA
NanoLOALv3

Finally, I don’t know why people don’t use abilties like All For One more often. Gonna let this marinate for a while though.

2mth
Damian_Gold
Damian_GoldLv2

is he a hero, villain or anti hero..........................................................................................................................

3mth
Vitor_Lindo
Vitor_LindoLv12

Tanto potencial indo para o lixo ele tem o poder do All For One mas não usa que lixo pode pegar os poder de todos os mutantes mas não faz e que nem uma cópia ---- kkkkkk cada capítulo e uma agonia de ler vendo o protagonista tão lixo e pq ele tem meta-conhecimento das HQs dos mangas e dos filmes mas mesmo assim AFF decepções

2mth
DaoistFnrIrp
DaoistFnrIrpLv1

Muy buena historia Bro 👍 No puedo esperar para leer el próximo capítulo ...................................................................

3mth
ayoub_hadou
ayoub_hadouLv4

it's a marvel harem fanfiction with no Yuri so that's great . the story progression is good not too fast nor slow. the MC has great interaction with the rest of the cast with no hollow bonds. overall great work one of my favorites

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Bad_news_83
Bad_news_83Lv3

I wish you add Natasha And Gwen ghost spider And Wanda To mc harem Also you must expanded the plot how about mc make adventure through space join ravagers and find new planet for mutated to teleport them there …….and teleport any new one Also. The ten rings mc should get them as his weapon

1mth
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