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2024-12-16 19:16

Hmm.. about character named joan, she shouldnt have dated him at all.. just friends with hidden feelings might have been enough in my opinion, she is really an idiot, if she knew that she and the mc are from diffrent backgrounds from the start then she still started liking him nonetheless which is really stupid if you think, and okay.. one can argue that one cant control ones feelings then be that it may she could have just kept the feelings hidden if she couldnt go through with till the end right.. what frustrating is that mc likes her even after seeing her kiss someone even if there is a big reason behind it. In my opinion even if there is a need for a kiss for the story to pogress as it is , i think a peck on the cheek could have been better... than a kiss on the lips right? actually considering her extreme feelings of love that was displayed there shouldnt be a kissing in the first place.. right author?( And if you are going to tell me that she only realised her extreme feelings when he died after one tear of being together i wint believe it..)

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Apexofhell666
Apexofhell666Lv10

the girl needed a reality check anyway... she might have thought that the relationship with mc was like a small fantasy away from her complicared world...like it wasnt real, and she didnt really consider the mc's feelings too much to a certain extend. but his death and his last words might have have woken her up i hope, i dont want to see the mc returned to earth to find her married or something.

Original_Eternal
Original_EternalLv1

nah that would be funny bro said no to a vampire mommy for her who is way better than joan at everything except maybe loving mc since she loved him before he became what he is now

Apexofhell666:the girl needed a reality check anyway... she might have thought that the relationship with mc was like a small fantasy away from her complicared world...like it wasnt real, and she didnt really consider the mc's feelings too much to a certain extend. but his death and his last words might have have woken her up i hope, i dont want to see the mc returned to earth to find her married or something.
Original_Eternal
Original_EternalLv1

said no to the prettiest girl alive just to see your love married happily ever after and bro what happened to mc wouldn't change her much i mean he died from an accident and the biggest thing is she left the date guy and ran straight for mc even if mc survived he would have still been killed by the girls family

Original_Eternal:nah that would be funny bro said no to a vampire mommy for her who is way better than joan at everything except maybe loving mc since she loved him before he became what he is now
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