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captainfatbelly
captainfatbellyLv47mth
2024-10-07 09:25

good translation but the mc is too Chinese and hides his power for no reason

Naruto: With Favorabiltity System

NahinS77
3.8
465 Chs

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SAINT_of_ORIGIN
SAINT_of_ORIGINLv14

nonsense, Chinese protagonist hiding power and being low key is IMPOSSIBLE.

5mth
15
Izumi_Katrina
Izumi_KatrinaLv1

Read it yourself pigs

SAINT_of_ORIGIN:nonsense, Chinese protagonist hiding power and being low key is IMPOSSIBLE.
4mth
SkinnyPenis
SkinnyPenisLv14

Izumi_Katrina:Read it yourself pigs
4mth
7
Verthragna
VerthragnaLv7

I think you should have used sarcasm instead of joke in that meme

16d
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Mister_Robot
Mister_RobotLv4

Nothing special about this fanfic. It's like one of the many that you can find in Fanfic.net. The MC is the same old unbothered transmigrator who's too cool for school. Plays 'safe' and hides his powers for no reason whatsoever. The lack of creativity in Naruto fanfics is so aggravating- either they're overconfident Chinese young master stories or something like this.

6mth

NahinS77
NahinS77Author

This is a translation of a Chinese fic. of course you know if you at least read the Synopsis. Thanks for reading. Hope you like the fic and I did decent enough job to translate and not change the style.

7mth
Gon_6888
Gon_6888Lv4

I will translate it with Google hehe::: 5/2/2/4/3 For the translator nothing to criticize, Few grammatical errors, but my problem is with the story there are many errors with the dates, the personalities of the characters, things that Kakashi does with the flying thunder, Rin possibly falls in love with Obito, mc pretends to be weak when he already shows that he is strong. That is what I got to see as far as I read it (I probably dropped it). Things I like: mc and Obito's friendship, the system, the comedy is not the best but it is there. and some things that I forgot.

6mth
HardenedWood
HardenedWoodLv2

Pretty good story, the protagonist is likeable, the system is cool, his actions are well thought out and interesting. Plenty of likeable characters in Kakashi’s time, I really have very few minor complaints, it’s been a fun read. Sometimes the translations aren’t completely polished for stuff like technique names, character names etc, but they’re pretty minor and easily understood with some context and Danzo is pretty outrageous but that’s nothing new. Overall, I’d give it a try.

6mth
hachidori717
hachidori717Lv2

Reveal spoiler

4mth
Jadeite000
Jadeite000Lv13

The writing is really good I will be dropping due to the deaths of sukumo and many others including shisui

3mth
AkabaneK
AkabaneKLv4

Reveal spoiler

3mth
chipressd
chipressdLv4

😭 after like 200 chapters the system is mainly just status checking

1mth
Vivre_Calme
Vivre_CalmeLv4

The translator did an amazing job I'm currently on ch154 and I don't think this is my cup of tea. I don't understand a lot of things but I think MC's personality is a bit pathetic. That's all I can say, the start is decent enough and the cheats he has still have functionality at the beginning. Reason for quitting: the personal portrayal of each character feels different from my memories.

2mth
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