did you even get his permission to rewrite his story?
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LIKEnot everyone will agree with you it's that simple and you don't have to agree with me, but alder said it himself he doesn't want his stories used, the author himself doesn't appreciate others using his work
permission is required for most things if it doesn't belong to you and if you can't understand that then that's just a you problem
I find that laughable as his work is based on others work already really fan fiction is pretty free rain and if you don't want others to use your work write an original story.