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Mr_SimpingLv143mth
2024-11-05 12:33

Like this story it has good progression and the system is well thought out. But it misses on a few small things that me as someone who plays baseball can’t ignore. Like the grip when he throws the ball the steps before he catches they way he has to plant his foot as he throws. But if you never played baseball or arent a fan you won’t notice the small missing details.

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Lucius_FreyLv15

It seemed fine to me? The basics seemed to be named fine, maybe I missed them saying to use a weird grip somewhere, and you are absolutely supposed to plant your feet when you throw for control. Even when using a Hop-step you plant your feet after. if you throw in stride without planting it’s much harder to get both strength and accuracy

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