Item: Rookie's Advantage
Rating: 4.6
Author: Ashwin_Tom

Ashwin_TomLv132mth

2024-09-30 13:56

I like the story progression, and the fact that the system does not provide op skills from the get go is a huge plus. The perspective of the MC being new to baseball gives a fresh vibe when reading. Overall it feels a bit slow but did not stop me from reading so far. I might come off a bit biased but i like all baseball novels 😂

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