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Primordial_Steeze
Primordial_SteezeLv122mth
2024-11-16 12:46

Author San, this novel is a dime a dozen...pls give us 2000 chapters of pure chaos..we will follow you till the end💯💯💯💯💯

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lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

Roger that 🫡

Nj_Ashart
Nj_AshartLv3

He is just like you Vic. 🤣🤣.

lyonciv0:Roger that 🫡
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

so you are still alive 😂😂 yes he is hehe 😄

Nj_Ashart:He is just like you Vic. 🤣🤣.
Nj_Ashart
Nj_AshartLv3

Yes somehow. he he.

lyonciv0:so you are still alive 😂😂 yes he is hehe 😄
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

hope you are fine though

Nj_Ashart:Yes somehow. he he.
Nj_Ashart
Nj_AshartLv3

I will be back in two weeks. dw. :)

lyonciv0:hope you are fine though
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

alright I will wait . hehe just don't over cook yourself

Nj_Ashart:I will be back in two weeks. dw. :)
Primordial_Steeze
Primordial_SteezeLv12

me??

Nj_Ashart:He is just like you Vic. 🤣🤣.
Nj_Ashart
Nj_AshartLv3

kind of. :)

Primordial_Steeze:me??
Primordial_Steeze
Primordial_SteezeLv12

I'm confused..but oh well😅😅

Nj_Ashart:kind of. :)
Nj_Ashart
Nj_AshartLv3

Actually your dear author san loves chaos just as much as you do. This is why I said he is like you. he he. 🙂🙂

Primordial_Steeze
Primordial_SteezeLv12

Hahaha.. I don't think he can compare cuz if he likes chaos, I very much like Primordial Chaos🤣🤣

Nj_Ashart:Actually your dear author san loves chaos just as much as you do. This is why I said he is like you. he he. 🙂🙂
Nj_Ashart
Nj_AshartLv3

I don't know about that. 🤣🤣. He has a dark mind. But it seems like we turned this section into an inbox. 😅😅

Primordial_Steeze
Primordial_SteezeLv12

lol..we will agree to disagree 🤣🤣

Nj_Ashart:I don't know about that. 🤣🤣. He has a dark mind. But it seems like we turned this section into an inbox. 😅😅
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