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Primordial_Steeze
Primordial_SteezeLv125mth
2024-11-16 20:46

Author San, this novel is a dime a dozen...pls give us 2000 chapters of pure chaos..we will follow you till the end💯💯💯💯💯

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lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

Roger that 🫡

Nj_Ashart
Nj_AshartLv4

He is just like you Vic. 🤣🤣.

lyonciv0:Roger that 🫡
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

so you are still alive 😂😂 yes he is hehe 😄

Nj_Ashart:He is just like you Vic. 🤣🤣.
Nj_Ashart
Nj_AshartLv4

Yes somehow. he he.

lyonciv0:so you are still alive 😂😂 yes he is hehe 😄
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

hope you are fine though

Nj_Ashart:Yes somehow. he he.
Nj_Ashart
Nj_AshartLv4

I will be back in two weeks. dw. :)

lyonciv0:hope you are fine though
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

alright I will wait . hehe just don't over cook yourself

Nj_Ashart:I will be back in two weeks. dw. :)
Primordial_Steeze
Primordial_SteezeLv12

me??

Nj_Ashart:He is just like you Vic. 🤣🤣.
Nj_Ashart
Nj_AshartLv4

kind of. :)

Primordial_Steeze:me??
Primordial_Steeze
Primordial_SteezeLv12

I'm confused..but oh well😅😅

Nj_Ashart:kind of. :)
Nj_Ashart
Nj_AshartLv4

Actually your dear author san loves chaos just as much as you do. This is why I said he is like you. he he. 🙂🙂

Primordial_Steeze
Primordial_SteezeLv12

Hahaha.. I don't think he can compare cuz if he likes chaos, I very much like Primordial Chaos🤣🤣

Nj_Ashart:Actually your dear author san loves chaos just as much as you do. This is why I said he is like you. he he. 🙂🙂
Nj_Ashart
Nj_AshartLv4

I don't know about that. 🤣🤣. He has a dark mind. But it seems like we turned this section into an inbox. 😅😅

Primordial_Steeze
Primordial_SteezeLv12

lol..we will agree to disagree 🤣🤣

Nj_Ashart:I don't know about that. 🤣🤣. He has a dark mind. But it seems like we turned this section into an inbox. 😅😅
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I have rarely been this dissatisfied with a book. It’s hard to decide where to even begin because every element feels like a complete mess. The world-building? Nonexistent. The author seems to have cobbled together ideas and characters blatantly borrowed from games, movies, and other stories without any effort to create something original. There’s no cohesive world, no sense of immersion, and certainly no thought put into how anything fits together. The basic laws of physics? Completely ignored. Everything is exaggerated to an absurd degree, and not in a fun or imaginative way—just nonsensical. The power system is equally horrendous, lacking any sort of structure, logic, or creativity. It feels like the author just threw random powers at characters without a thought to balance or depth. The plot is an utter disaster, with no clear direction or purpose. Events seem to happen arbitrarily, and the pacing is all over the place. There’s no tension, no stakes, and no reason to care about what’s going on. And don’t even get me started on the character development. The characters are flat, one-dimensional, and painfully juvenile. They lack any sort of growth or complexity, making it impossible to connect with them. Speaking of juvenile, the writing style is so childish it feels like it was written by an 8-year-old. There’s no sense of maturity, nuance, or sophistication. It’s filled with cringeworthy dialogue and overly simplistic descriptions that fail to evoke any emotion or imagery. Overall, this book is an exercise in frustration. It’s immature, unoriginal, and utterly devoid of anything resembling quality storytelling. I wouldn’t recommend it to anyone, not even as a guilty pleasure. Save your time and energy for something worthwhile.

Argintum_So2
Argintum_So2Lv1

not bad fanfiction, I would even say good, but as for me, the author needs to devote more time to mc, and although the story is just beginning, our mc has become a force, but compared to creatures in space, he is a weakling and cannon fodder, albeit at a high level. Dear author, please tell us more about magic, etc. Even now it can be compared to the whole universe, but I think magic can surprise and at least give him more opportunities, as well as the fact that he travels through different worlds and universes , as for me, it is necessary to take away interesting forces besides souls , and although I understand which is already very difficult to write at the moment, because our mc is almost omnipotent, but please let him start using the laws more often. Also, please ask the author to come up with a normal name Mc, otherwise void is not very cool for me, but not very much, as a person who reads this with a translation from English to Russian, I say it's a real trifle to come up with a name for a demon. It's also worth giving go more interesting slaves, and as for me, a little more cruelty to him, otherwise sometimes he does shit that makes me want to cry tears of blood. I understand that the author wants to diversify the plot and not make the mc completely cold and aloof From everything , but the mc should not be made stupid. He could have avoided some problems if he had shown great cruelty , but there's nothing to be done about it , so to speak, it 's the author's will , as well as about the gods and I would like you to explain the difference in their powers, Their + and their - as far as I understand, there is an energy of faith and I would see if mc could create faith in himself and become a god? Anyway, I've given the author a couple of ideas here, so let him decide for himself. In general, come out with chapters more often and I'll definitely finish reading the whole top! The author also holds on to good inspiration.

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