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lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author4mth
2024-09-12 00:54

Author here, so check it out, if you are just reading it then welcome . give me your feedback and for those following it before from the previous title then let's go guys. happy to see you guys .. thanks for the love and support much appreciated

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Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Romance?

lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

no

Romance_guy:Romance?
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

💔

lyonciv0:no
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

sorry bro

Romance_guy:💔
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

🫂

lyonciv0:sorry bro
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

It’s alright

lyonciv0:sorry bro
DaoistsLixYt
DaoistsLixYtLv4

I hope no harem as well

lyonciv0:sorry bro
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

no harem. check it out ..

DaoistsLixYt:I hope no harem as well
Clover18
Clover18Lv3

They should check the novel's labels, don't you think?

lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

yes they should sorry for late reply

Clover18:They should check the novel's labels, don't you think?
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

which chapter did you read ?

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lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

alright let me check

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lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

alright let me check ✔️

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lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

oh okay checking

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lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

I didn't see any where were void needed help from a Rank 0 being. he only needed linkir to tell him where the nearest city was.

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lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

oh that. simple.. I thought I explained . if he was alone with his aura. they will easily find him. and send others to him. but as an army ... it is majorly for distraction . he didn't need them for anything else.

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lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

did I answer your question well ?

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Christian_Lynch
Christian_LynchLv3

bro when u said evil that is an understatement this dude is RUTHLESS i feel bad for likir

lyonciv0:no harem. check it out ..
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

..cough... it will be fine.. i feel bad to but there's a limit to how much I can help her after all

Christian_Lynch:bro when u said evil that is an understatement this dude is RUTHLESS i feel bad for likir
_asherj
_asherjLv3

It’s not there fault sometimes (and I mean a lot) you read a novel with nothing but good things for tags only to be invested for 100 chapters and now there’s a late romance and harem out of no where it’s insufferable

Clover18:They should check the novel's labels, don't you think?
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Terminator_x7Lv4

I have rarely been this dissatisfied with a book. It’s hard to decide where to even begin because every element feels like a complete mess. The world-building? Nonexistent. The author seems to have cobbled together ideas and characters blatantly borrowed from games, movies, and other stories without any effort to create something original. There’s no cohesive world, no sense of immersion, and certainly no thought put into how anything fits together. The basic laws of physics? Completely ignored. Everything is exaggerated to an absurd degree, and not in a fun or imaginative way—just nonsensical. The power system is equally horrendous, lacking any sort of structure, logic, or creativity. It feels like the author just threw random powers at characters without a thought to balance or depth. The plot is an utter disaster, with no clear direction or purpose. Events seem to happen arbitrarily, and the pacing is all over the place. There’s no tension, no stakes, and no reason to care about what’s going on. And don’t even get me started on the character development. The characters are flat, one-dimensional, and painfully juvenile. They lack any sort of growth or complexity, making it impossible to connect with them. Speaking of juvenile, the writing style is so childish it feels like it was written by an 8-year-old. There’s no sense of maturity, nuance, or sophistication. It’s filled with cringeworthy dialogue and overly simplistic descriptions that fail to evoke any emotion or imagery. Overall, this book is an exercise in frustration. It’s immature, unoriginal, and utterly devoid of anything resembling quality storytelling. I wouldn’t recommend it to anyone, not even as a guilty pleasure. Save your time and energy for something worthwhile.

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