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lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author8mth
2024-09-12 08:54

Author here, so check it out, if you are just reading it then welcome . give me your feedback and for those following it before from the previous title then let's go guys. happy to see you guys .. thanks for the love and support much appreciated

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Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Romance?

lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

no

Romance_guy:Romance?
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

đź’”

lyonciv0:no
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

sorry bro

Romance_guy:đź’”
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

đź«‚

lyonciv0:sorry bro
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

It’s alright

lyonciv0:sorry bro
DaoistsLixYt
DaoistsLixYtLv4

I hope no harem as well

lyonciv0:sorry bro
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

no harem. check it out ..

DaoistsLixYt:I hope no harem as well
Clover18
Clover18Lv3

They should check the novel's labels, don't you think?

lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

yes they should sorry for late reply

Clover18:They should check the novel's labels, don't you think?
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

which chapter did you read ?

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lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

alright let me check

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lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

alright let me check ✔️

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lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

oh okay checking

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lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

I didn't see any where were void needed help from a Rank 0 being. he only needed linkir to tell him where the nearest city was.

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lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

oh that. simple.. I thought I explained . if he was alone with his aura. they will easily find him. and send others to him. but as an army ... it is majorly for distraction . he didn't need them for anything else.

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lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

did I answer your question well ?

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Christian_Lynch
Christian_LynchLv3

bro when u said evil that is an understatement this dude is RUTHLESS i feel bad for likir

lyonciv0:no harem. check it out ..
lyonciv0
lyonciv0Author

..cough... it will be fine.. i feel bad to but there's a limit to how much I can help her after all

Christian_Lynch:bro when u said evil that is an understatement this dude is RUTHLESS i feel bad for likir
_asherj
_asherjLv3

It’s not there fault sometimes (and I mean a lot) you read a novel with nothing but good things for tags only to be invested for 100 chapters and now there’s a late romance and harem out of no where it’s insufferable

Clover18:They should check the novel's labels, don't you think?
Other Reviews
Project_Horizon
Project_HorizonLv4

I have rarely been this dissatisfied with a book. It’s hard to decide where to even begin because every element feels like a complete mess. The world-building? Nonexistent. The author seems to have cobbled together ideas and characters blatantly borrowed from games, movies, and other stories without any effort to create something original. There’s no cohesive world, no sense of immersion, and certainly no thought put into how anything fits together. The basic laws of physics? Completely ignored. Everything is exaggerated to an absurd degree, and not in a fun or imaginative way—just nonsensical. The power system is equally horrendous, lacking any sort of structure, logic, or creativity. It feels like the author just threw random powers at characters without a thought to balance or depth. The plot is an utter disaster, with no clear direction or purpose. Events seem to happen arbitrarily, and the pacing is all over the place. There’s no tension, no stakes, and no reason to care about what’s going on. And don’t even get me started on the character development. The characters are flat, one-dimensional, and painfully juvenile. They lack any sort of growth or complexity, making it impossible to connect with them. Speaking of juvenile, the writing style is so childish it feels like it was written by an 8-year-old. There’s no sense of maturity, nuance, or sophistication. It’s filled with cringeworthy dialogue and overly simplistic descriptions that fail to evoke any emotion or imagery. Overall, this book is an exercise in frustration. It’s immature, unoriginal, and utterly devoid of anything resembling quality storytelling. I wouldn’t recommend it to anyone, not even as a guilty pleasure. Save your time and energy for something worthwhile.

Argintum_So2
Argintum_So2Lv1

not bad fanfiction, I would even say good, but as for me, the author needs to devote more time to mc, and although the story is just beginning, our mc has become a force, but compared to creatures in space, he is a weakling and cannon fodder, albeit at a high level. Dear author, please tell us more about magic, etc. Even now it can be compared to the whole universe, but I think magic can surprise and at least give him more opportunities, as well as the fact that he travels through different worlds and universes , as for me, it is necessary to take away interesting forces besides souls , and although I understand which is already very difficult to write at the moment, because our mc is almost omnipotent, but please let him start using the laws more often. Also, please ask the author to come up with a normal name Mc, otherwise void is not very cool for me, but not very much, as a person who reads this with a translation from English to Russian, I say it's a real trifle to come up with a name for a demon. It's also worth giving go more interesting slaves, and as for me, a little more cruelty to him, otherwise sometimes he does shit that makes me want to cry tears of blood. I understand that the author wants to diversify the plot and not make the mc completely cold and aloof From everything , but the mc should not be made stupid. He could have avoided some problems if he had shown great cruelty , but there's nothing to be done about it , so to speak, it 's the author's will , as well as about the gods and I would like you to explain the difference in their powers, Their + and their - as far as I understand, there is an energy of faith and I would see if mc could create faith in himself and become a god? Anyway, I've given the author a couple of ideas here, so let him decide for himself. In general, come out with chapters more often and I'll definitely finish reading the whole top! The author also holds on to good inspiration.

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