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Kilaske
KilaskeLv67mth
2024-09-21 09:10

The Chatgpt made me lower my expectation, because most of the time people who use it here are just plain lazy and full of c***, but this one is different. Never really watched Stargate, so it was a little boring at the start, but the interactions are actually great. 5/5 on that one. There was a moment where I was fuming because it felt like MC was showing too much info that could be used against him, but thankfully or hopefully it didn't get to that. TO THE PEOPLE WHO ARE TURNED OFF BY THE 1 STAR REVIEW don't listen to that person. That's either a troll or a bot. Someone commented that that person keeps giving 1 star to other novels and he/she is right.

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Tritonos
4.4
57 Chs

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_VOIDLESS_
_VOIDLESS_Lv12

That was honestly too good for a Chatgpt story I was expecting it to be inhumane to read but you have done something a lot of authors on this platform fail to do.

8mth

Tritonos
TritonosAuthor

I'm a big Stargate fan and thought, why not a fanfic in Marvel with Stargate. Then came the problem, how can The MC even start? Without billions of US dollars, MC can't even start building the Stargate stuff. So I had to add Harry Potter Magic. And this is where the idea for the novel came from. Not my picture, but these are the ships I imagine.

8mth
DaviToledo
DaviToledoLv13

thanks for writing this work of art author-san.

8mth
NagiToad
NagiToadLv4

It's an alright read if you like an Mc that is more technologically inclined The writing of the story is easily understandable and as long as you don't read it with a critical eye (or a questioning one) it is a nice read Unfortunately i read some comments questioning it and from then on i couldn't help doing the same myself One big thing I see (that isn't a spoiler) is how the Mc got the money to accomplish a majority of his projects (the author did show a scene of how he acquired some money but even if the Mc did the same thing every week since the day he was like 4 for the same amount of money then he wouldn't even have 1% of the needed resources for his projects especially since he wants to remain Lowkey) His starting interaction with a certain character feels extremely forced (mainly the reason why they're interactions but the conversations between them are good) What ultimately lead me to writing this review though is because of another forced interaction with another character I'm not saying this is a bad fanfic far from it as it may have been my preconceived expectations from the title of the fanfic and the synopsis (along with chapter 1) If you're interested in this fanfic I would recommend reading some of the first chapters to see if it catches your fancy

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christopher_stuart
christopher_stuartLv15

so far amazing this is one of my fav authors and i love it but i seriously think that everyone should at least guve it a try anyway this book is amazing lol

8mth
Yoshitha_Maddineni
Yoshitha_MaddineniLv4

I really liked it! I haven’t ready anything much like this up until now

8mth
Glory_Frost
Glory_FrostLv1

This is so good ! I read it again and again and again ! I can't wait for the next chapter ! 😁🥰😍🤩❤️❤️🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

7mth
CALE_HENITSU
CALE_HENITSULv2

No começo realmente não esperava muito coisa pelo fato de ser dito ser feito por chat-gpt,mas no decorrer da história fiquei até impressionado, a história é boa tem bastante coisa que infelizmente não consegui entender já que não conheço a série de "stargate", um dos defeitos é que mesmo a história sendo bem "humana" ainda passa aquela sensação de IA mas é facilmente esquecivel e não atrapalha em quase nada na leitura, na minha opinião eu não gostei dos saltos do tempo em que o Mc inicia algum plano e depois já pula pra ela feita, perde um pouco da imersão de ver a trajetória do que está sendo feito, mas também não é necessário algo extremamente detalhado sobre oque está acontecendo só um detalhe do que eu senti lendo, algumas conversas e encontros no início foram bem estranhas mas os diálogos foram bons, simplificando tudo e uma boa história com alguns erros aqui e ali mas fácil daria um 8.5/10 pra ela, algumas coisas não foram do meu gosto mas isso é pessoal então não vou falar sobre já que não é geral.

7mth
Novel_Manga_2624
Novel_Manga_2624Lv4

enjoy this gem. ***************************************************************************************************************************

7mth
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