It's an alright read if you like an Mc that is more technologically inclined The writing of the story is easily understandable and as long as you don't read it with a critical eye (or a questioning one) it is a nice read Unfortunately i read some comments questioning it and from then on i couldn't help doing the same myself One big thing I see (that isn't a spoiler) is how the Mc got the money to accomplish a majority of his projects (the author did show a scene of how he acquired some money but even if the Mc did the same thing every week since the day he was like 4 for the same amount of money then he wouldn't even have 1% of the needed resources for his projects especially since he wants to remain Lowkey) His starting interaction with a certain character feels extremely forced (mainly the reason why they're interactions but the conversations between them are good) What ultimately lead me to writing this review though is because of another forced interaction with another character I'm not saying this is a bad fanfic far from it as it may have been my preconceived expectations from the title of the fanfic and the synopsis (along with chapter 1) If you're interested in this fanfic I would recommend reading some of the first chapters to see if it catches your fancy
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Yes. I wasn't that good at many points and didn't write it well. But I only hinted at the point about money. MC is a watchmaker and sculpture maker. MC could make $10,000 to $80,000 per sale. He can use the money to buy scrap from a scrap dealer. I had described that MC can also do alchemy and the rules for magic are not so strict in the sense of alchemy in Marvel. thus MC can convert scrap into gold or other metals (as long as he has the atomic mass, he can turn lead into gold, or iron into lead, etc.). In any case, I hinted at this but didn't describe it in text in a chapter.
I understand that and many of his projects are completely understandable the big one though was the Jupiter base with several kilometers of space (as in the materials needed themselves as the space inside can be expanded with magic with 100% makes sense) However that point can obviously just be a my lack of understanding of HP magic (I know the big ones but not knowledgeable on many or it could be an original spell you created which will also make sense) I'm willing to concede on that point though
Not Harry Potter knowledge, but Stargate knowledge. Beam technology can work at distances of light seconds. Thus, all asteroids near Jupiter are the building materials for the station.
