Item: Young Master's PoV: Woke Up As A Villain In A Game One Day
Rating: 3.6
Author: Justin_Brooks

Justin_BrooksLv142mth

2024-09-13 04:56

Why are you writing the story like this in third person it’s irritating and annoying and it’s only a huge monologue

Young Master's PoV: Woke Up As A Villain In A Game One Day

The_One_Who_Was

4.5

53 Chs

Liked by 3 people

Replies11

The_One_Who_WasAuthor

Only prelude and the first chapter is in third person -- the latter IS, in fact, written as a prologue 👽

2mth

Dozer_2600Lv3

Does this novel have romance? Is this a harem novel?

The_One_Who_Was:Only prelude and the first chapter is in third person -- the latter IS, in fact, written as a prologue 👽

2mth

The_One_Who_WasAuthor

No harem. At least no plans for it currently. There will be romance, but the story will mostly focus on mind games, grimdark adventures, action, and maybe a sprinkle of mystery to top it all off. (Face slapping and Weak to Op too, ofc.)

Dozer_2600:Does this novel have romance? Is this a harem novel?

2mth

Dozer_2600Lv3

So probably a single female lead?

The_One_Who_Was:No harem. At least no plans for it currently. There will be romance, but the story will mostly focus on mind games, grimdark adventures, action, and maybe a sprinkle of mystery to top it all off. (Face slapping and Weak to Op too, ofc.)

2mth

Dozer_2600Lv3

and why did you add Yandre tag?

The_One_Who_Was:No harem. At least no plans for it currently. There will be romance, but the story will mostly focus on mind games, grimdark adventures, action, and maybe a sprinkle of mystery to top it all off. (Face slapping and Weak to Op too, ofc.)

2mth

Hardy1jLv14

hope you don't make it harem

The_One_Who_Was:Only prelude and the first chapter is in third person -- the latter IS, in fact, written as a prologue 👽

2mth

mac_joe257Lv12

make it harem💥😁

The_One_Who_Was:Only prelude and the first chapter is in third person -- the latter IS, in fact, written as a prologue 👽

2mth

RadpiplupLv13

please dont make harem

The_One_Who_Was:No harem. At least no plans for it currently. There will be romance, but the story will mostly focus on mind games, grimdark adventures, action, and maybe a sprinkle of mystery to top it all off. (Face slapping and Weak to Op too, ofc.)

1mth

Barberiyanking_123Lv12

harem harem harem🔥💥

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ShadowinxLv3

harem.harem.harem

SHADOW_FEVERLv11

well it's your wish at last i would like to read if it is harem or isn't but still I will prefer harem though because most harem novels out there have almost same theme...a new theme with harem will be peak

The_One_Who_Was:No harem. At least no plans for it currently. There will be romance, but the story will mostly focus on mind games, grimdark adventures, action, and maybe a sprinkle of mystery to top it all off. (Face slapping and Weak to Op too, ofc.)

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