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Everything seems very forced within the story. Read 20 chapters to get a feel for it and I personally think a longer “prologue” to the betrayal is much needed. Main character is supposed to be the top of the first years and a genius but no one listens to his side of the story which is very weird and feels too forced without more context. Maybe a few chapters of the Academy characters interacting before hand could sell it better but even the parents not listening ,after giving their all to send him to that Academy, just feels horribly forced. Then he’s accepted no problem at all within the aunt’s household… either way more worldbuilding and fleshing out of every character’s motive is really needed. POV switching is prevalent within the story as well but personally, I think it should be handled differently by making dedicated chapters or a cleaner text break within the chapter instead of just the next paragraph.

HOOK LINE AND SINKER. So far the book got be hooked and my heart wouldn’t stop beating fast. Love the story, I related a lot with the main character. Can’t wait for more chapters to come. HONESTLY best book i have read so far please give it a try as a reader.

I feel like a father proud of the evolution of this son, now your writing is really like novelupdate stories, good job. - - - - - - - - How long before your big project between? I need the true ending of P Ava to keep living

Pertamax 😎📖🥇 Thanks for the Books!!!!! 😆 📖🍻 Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters 🥰📖🍷

Nice Novel but how can i use powerstones

Good read, been spending all of my FPS on it. You may want to cut the big paragraphs into smaller ones though, makes it much easier to read.

This is hands down the best beast taming book out right now and my personal favorite. The author know what he is doing, this boy is cooking over here. I will stay with this book until it's done. This author can have my money,points and stones. I will highly support this book that I always look forward to read. Even though he the Main character don't use his system as much as I like, the book is so good you don't really care. Thank you for all the your hard work. bless you

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