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Kitsune_Kurama
Kitsune_KuramaLv155mth
2024-11-02 10:49

thanks for this treat of a story, well crafted, can't wait to see him explore the world and discover new and power monster to tame and befriend

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Yalatola
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that's the core of the story, he will do that and more

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DoomMonkey
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Buff_n_stuff
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Okie brutally honest review, aimed at people thinking about reading this book. The GOOD STUFF: The writing is good, small errors;however, it’s well written from a technical standpoint. The MC and most the characters are all pretty amazing. The antagonist is a little over the top annoying (young master type shit), but not as bad as some novels. The relationships are incredibly well written. Feom friendship, family and romance it’s all well done. Honestly this is probably the highlight of the book. The world building is so so. We really don’t know what the world is like, only the individual cities we find ourselves in. However, that’s not necessarily a bad thing. Sometimes authors create this huge world, but don’t give visual references and it’s impossible to sort out which countries are where etc…. The BAD stuff: Honestly not much to criticize here, and most of it can be skipped by skipping chapters. The most overwhelming negative to this novel are the fight scenes. Absolute cringe dog shit in my opinion. I honestly started just skipping them because they’re so terrible to read. Though some people might like the fighting style. The fighting style is the stereotypical anime, mc is losing powers up and wins type. (Well the important fights). We are talking 5 chapters in one fight scene. Like fuck bro. Both characters holding back, then using a “trump card”. Then holding back and using another. Multiple times in every fight scene. When you’re reading a fight and both characters “aura explodes even stronger” 4-7 times in one fight it just lacks creativity. And honestly that’s the only issue this novel had. Let’s be real. In real fights that matter people fight hard. If the MC wasn’t against absolute brain rot retards he’d have lost every fight, and vice versa. In a real fight people fight hard from the beginning. “Just warming up?” Give me a break, that’s what people do before a fight starts. So yea cringe. If the fight scenes weren’t dumb I’d rate it 5/5. Other small isssue I’d say is the overuse of face slapping when it comes to the academy people. Like once or twice is one thing, but when it consumes 80+ chapters once again kind of an issue with creativity as far as providing conflict within the plot. CLOSING: I recommend you read the novel. Honestly great read. Good characters, and absolutely wonderful relationships. And if you ignore the hella chuni fight scenes the novel is one of the best on the platform.

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