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2024-11-16 01:15

Very good characters, very good plot. I hope main character influences konoha more. Like controlling every clan from shadows, hell even the village. He can kill danzo easily. I hope writer will pick up story more. İIhope he can change will of orochimaru.

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How fast does the mc age/ progress? How old is the mc now?

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The only times I comment is when I find a work that is entertaining and this indeed entertained me. Verdict: You should read it if you are looking for a fun read, it may not be a masterpiece but it is fun. As for why that reason is down below. For the characters, the MC for one is decent and has a brain, the side-characters are also ok with some having their own moments which distinguishes them making them not feel "flat" like you often encounter in amateur works or fanfics. 8.5/10 Story development on the other hand is where I think this fic shines. It doesn't drag out events tho I think it can be a little fast at times. I like how this fic explores the Nara clan which is often ignored in other fics, Orochimaru who is a staple villain, Anko & Shusui who is an underappreciated character both in the main series and fanfics. 9.5/10 World Building, to be honest world building in fanfics is iffy to rate as often time readers like me already know the lore from the inside out so I'll just rate this based on how much the author added or twisted to distinguish it from the canon work. I'd say the author did a great job in making the MC's abilities work and is 'logical' enough that you can reason out that indeed that could happen. The bleach elements like powers and tech remain strictly as inspiration except for rewards and the MC really makes an effort applying it into the Shinobi World through research making them into Justus or ninja tools, though I think there are still not enough bleach elements being explored at the time of writing this review the MC is still exploring a little bit though I really look forward to how the author intends to stitch bleach tech and powers in this world. There is not really much the author added into the lore at the time of this review so yeah that is all. Overall it is a 9/10 So considering everything this humble poison tester rate this one 9/10 : )

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