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Billy_Agustian17
Billy_Agustian17Lv16mth
2024-09-13 18:50

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Naruto: Kurotsuchi Mayuri

PirateKing24
4.7
185 Chs

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sep_deiv
sep_deivLv14

Cool fic . For me Kurotsuchi Mayuri was always overlooked character just like Orochimaru.................... ............................................................. ................................................................................................................................

5mth

R0B
R0BLv2

It's really good! Keep up the good work! The more good karma the better... Might isekai you later.

4mth
Runawayy_
Runawayy_Lv3

Raw?.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

6mth
IMXNOOBX
IMXNOOBXLv2

Не знаю за что ставят высокие оценки за глупые идеи в этом фанфике. Во-первых баланс сил нарушен, вселенная Блича намного раз превосходит вселенную Наруто, и тот факт, что автор выбрал шаблон персонажа из сильной вселенной уже делает сложность правильной интерпретации в слабый мир Наруто. Особенно очень сильного персонажа Маюри Куроцучи, при этом в истории нет ни его внешности, ни его способностей. Название кликбейт. Глупость в том, что выдавать на публику новые исследования для того, чтобы увеличить свои силы, кринж.

3mth
Hate_This_shit
Hate_This_shitLv3

it's pretty decent, though the original is dropped and hasn't been updated in a few months.

4mth
SekaiForLife
SekaiForLifeLv4

Honestly not bad and I am enjoying it. I hope to see more updates in the future. I like the Mc and honestly research characters are always pretty cool.

5mth
Jadrienne_Lee
Jadrienne_LeeLv4

After reading 145 chapters! I finally decided to leave a review! Firstly, i love how orochimaru is not taken advantage of and was kagetsu's ally and after looking at the latest chapters I can't wait for mc to make a Vasto Lorde. And the more obvious reason i like this fic is because you got him to be like Kurotsuchi Mayuri, i mean he was really underrated. Keep up the good work! 👍

1mth
ILove_Hayan048
ILove_Hayan048Lv4

The only times I comment is when I find a work that is entertaining and this indeed entertained me. Verdict: You should read it if you are looking for a fun read, it may not be a masterpiece but it is fun. As for why that reason is down below. For the characters, the MC for one is decent and has a brain, the side-characters are also ok with some having their own moments which distinguishes them making them not feel "flat" like you often encounter in amateur works or fanfics. 8.5/10 Story development on the other hand is where I think this fic shines. It doesn't drag out events tho I think it can be a little fast at times. I like how this fic explores the Nara clan which is often ignored in other fics, Orochimaru who is a staple villain, Anko & Shusui who is an underappreciated character both in the main series and fanfics. 9.5/10 World Building, to be honest world building in fanfics is iffy to rate as often time readers like me already know the lore from the inside out so I'll just rate this based on how much the author added or twisted to distinguish it from the canon work. I'd say the author did a great job in making the MC's abilities work and is 'logical' enough that you can reason out that indeed that could happen. The bleach elements like powers and tech remain strictly as inspiration except for rewards and the MC really makes an effort applying it into the Shinobi World through research making them into Justus or ninja tools, though I think there are still not enough bleach elements being explored at the time of writing this review the MC is still exploring a little bit though I really look forward to how the author intends to stitch bleach tech and powers in this world. There is not really much the author added into the lore at the time of this review so yeah that is all. Overall it is a 9/10 So considering everything this humble poison tester rate this one 9/10 : )

2mth
pharos1701
pharos1701Lv1

..........................................................................................................good...................................................................................

3mth
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