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I sometimes do read BL series. However, I have a preference for lighter, more vanilla stories rather than darker themes. When I came across this novel, I gave it a try. After trying it, I also explored other Omegaverse novels. I have to admit, this one is something different. It really stands apart in how it’s written and presented. World-Building (7 out of 10) I’d rate the world-building a 7 out of 10. Tristan works at a club, and while I understand this setting, the portrayal of his job over these three chapters felt underdeveloped. It could have been explored better—perhaps with more details about where the club was located, like downtown or a specific district. This would have helped expand the world around Tristan. That said, Tristan himself is introduced well, and so are the characters around him. The world-building does lay a solid foundation, but there’s room for further branching and depth in future chapters. Character Development (8 out of 10) Tristan has a traumatized childhood, which clearly influences his actions and mindset. However, throughout the chapters, it's evident that he develops emotionally and mentally. His sense of responsibility is one of his defining traits—he takes on the burden of those around him and strives to protect them. This not only drives Tristan’s growth but also shapes the development of the characters around him. The side characters, while not explored in great depth, are far from two-dimensional. They don’t merely exist to serve Tristan’s story; they stand on their own. Each is introduced in a way that makes them feel relevant to the plot without being overused. They have their own motivations and provide meaningful interactions with Tristan, adding depth to the overall narrative. Pacing (8 out of 10) The pacing is solid but slightly inconsistent. Some parts feel faster, while others are a bit slower. While this fluctuation exists, it doesn’t significantly impact the story. Pacing is done well overall, but there’s room for refinement to create a more even flow throughout the narrative. Narration (10 out of 10) I have to give narration a perfect 10 out of 10. Every story has its own style of narration, and this one uses a first-person point of view, making us see the world through Tristan's eyes. The challenge with this approach is that many authors struggle to execute it well. Often, the story becomes too focused on the main character, leaving little room to explore the world beyond their perspective. However, this story does something unique—it blends first-person narration with a slight shift in perspective. Although the story primarily follows Tristan’s point of view, it occasionally steps away from that and then returns, offering a more rounded experience without losing the intimacy of the first-person style. This mix makes the narration stand out and adds depth to the storytelling. Despite my personal dislike for this kind of narration, because many authors can’t execute it properly, this story was done exceptionally well. In fact, I was able to reach 24 chapters, which speaks volumes about how well the narration is executed. Story Development (7 out of 10) This story has a dark tone, giving off dystopian vibes where certain groups are oppressed, like alphas oppressing omegas. While I don’t fully understand the theme, it’s important to address it. Morality within the story is questionable—it makes readers reflect on what’s happening, but they’re compelled to keep reading. Tristan, in particular, is shaped by the darker side of society, growing through despair and sorrow, while others may have been raised in more hopeful circumstances. Despite this, we also see his resilience—he strives and develops even within the dark side, which makes his character arc compelling. This aspect of the story is well executed. So, why do I rate it 7 out of 10? Despite its good aspects, I’m only at chapter 24, so I can’t rate it higher or lower at this point. The story shows potential, but I need more to form a clearer judgment. Conclusion: Everything is fine with this book, except for the cover page—it could have been done better. But other than that, I have to say, for those who love Omegaverse stories, this one is definitely worth a read. It brings something new to the table. What sets it apart is that it features a perfectly bred omega—a perfect omega, perhaps. Another thing is that my understanding of omegas, alphas, and betas comes from werewolf lore, so seeing this take on the concept surprised me. I didn’t even know such a thing existed. After trying this story, I also explored other Omegaverse novels to see how they work. Although I still don’t understand the concept fully—it’s still quite confusing, and I can’t make sense of how it works—it defies the laws of biology. But this story, despite being an Omegaverse story, stands out. It’s not your typical Omegaverse narrative. So, if you’re interested, give it a try and see whether you like it or not. Overall, it’s a good read.

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