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DaoistajWKW7Lv32mth
2024-12-13 13:17

So much nonsense How can someone threaten a rich man who has half a billion dollars The hero can simply hire a bodyguard How can a worthless person kidnap his girlfriend I felt myself that the hero is not safe enough and the hero did not feel anything?And the hero remained like this with a bank account worths half a billion dollars without even a single bodyguard for him or his friends.

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User_Name_Triple
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This is my first rebate story so go easy on me and also let me know the kind of rebate stories you would like in the future under here. This way I can create more books around rebate stories just for you. I will choose the one with the most likes!

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YaTiahLv5

I am utterly appalled by the recent developments in this novel. After reading up to chapter 81, I couldn't even finish chapter 82 before giving up in sheer disgust. The introduction of NTR and the MC's despicable actions in destroying a happily married couple with a young child is absolutely repulsive. I had initially hoped the author would refrain from turning the MC into a homewrecker, but instead, they chose to have him meticulously manipulate and seduce the married woman into an affair. To make matters worse, the story expects readers to root for this detestable character. This is a clear indication of the author's complete lack of a moral compass. If you're going to include such reprehensible content, at least have the decency to put an NTR tag on your book! I am thoroughly disgusted and have decided to drop this novel immediately. The MC is truly despicable, and such a character deserves nothing less than a fitting demise in any other story.

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LotusDragonLv14

So it’s mostly the little things that make this subpar to terrible. California is a state not a city, and it’s really big with lots of differences across it. If you mean the L.A./Hollywood area as a caricature fine, BUT it does not rain there. The whole point of the area is it has no weather. Cops in the U. S. can get away with lots of stuff, but making a person transfer money out of electronic banking, nope. The setting makes the story less believable not more. It’s like saying all Midwest farming is rice paddies. Unless it’s addressed why culture mashing is happening, it’s just makes the story ungrounded.

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Tr0uble_MakerLv4

Man, if you don't want non-privileged readers to stop following your novel, just post an announcement. It's been around a week and with more than 20 chapters since you didn't post a chapter for non-privileged readers

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Afonso_AaronLv5

i like the story ......................

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Ahmed_Koroma_1382Lv15

I like the concept, and the writing is good. I will look forward to seeing how this novel goes. Keep up the excellent work, and most importantly, write a story you like.

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