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Usiel
UsielLv131mth
2024-10-04 18:07

Pure idiocy, excellent trash, king of morons MC. Simp wuss and beta mc. Trusting bumbledork showing of his talents. Befriending the idiotic trio. Going to gryffindor instead of ravens. This sorry excuse of fiction is clearly a translation, a bad one at that.

Hogwarts' White Lord

HornyFBI
4.6
107 Chs

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LiveandLove
LiveandLoveLv3

Yeah, stop the cap you serial hater

1mth
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Celestial_Kaiser
Celestial_KaiserLv4

Nah...most of those novels are literally trash, he just like to comment on their trashy-ness. And he ain't completely wrong, this chinese version of harry potter fic is simply leaves a bad taste to HP fans like me. And if you think I'm wrong, then you might wanna try, HP: A magical journey, fic

LiveandLove:Yeah, stop the cap you serial hater
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1mth
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Diggo_Fake
Diggo_FakeLv1

I disagree, this guy simply hates any MC that isn't a Villain or evil, and puts most of the stories as trash for that reason. Don't romanticize a guy like this.

Celestial_Kaiser:Nah...most of those novels are literally trash, he just like to comment on their trashy-ness. And he ain't completely wrong, this chinese version of harry potter fic is simply leaves a bad taste to HP fans like me. And if you think I'm wrong, then you might wanna try, HP: A magical journey, fic
1mth
6
Celestial_Kaiser
Celestial_KaiserLv4

Well I was only talking about those visible in the picture. I don't know if that guy hates good ones too .

Diggo_Fake:I disagree, this guy simply hates any MC that isn't a Villain or evil, and puts most of the stories as trash for that reason. Don't romanticize a guy like this.
1mth
4
Andora_000
Andora_000Lv1

as the guy above said, he's right. About the villain, many people like to read villains because they are often smart and use their heads. And as for this fanfic, I would give it 2 stars. In my opinion, the disadvantages are: it seems to me that the dialogues are not connected, the fact that he reveals his ability to predict (he must have a hidden trump card and there is little chance that anyone will find out about his ability), the way he laughs when he first meets Hermione (I did not see anything funny in this where you can laugh), the way he reacts to the warning for thieves in Gringots (the bank that he should open the safes and invite everyone to rob him). This fanfic has potential, but it needs to be rewritten.

Diggo_Fake:I disagree, this guy simply hates any MC that isn't a Villain or evil, and puts most of the stories as trash for that reason. Don't romanticize a guy like this.
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Diggo_Fake
Diggo_FakeLv1

It's not that. I wasn't giving my opinion on whether the fic was good or not, but rather on the parameters this guy uses to classify it.

Andora_000:as the guy above said, he's right. About the villain, many people like to read villains because they are often smart and use their heads. And as for this fanfic, I would give it 2 stars. In my opinion, the disadvantages are: it seems to me that the dialogues are not connected, the fact that he reveals his ability to predict (he must have a hidden trump card and there is little chance that anyone will find out about his ability), the way he laughs when he first meets Hermione (I did not see anything funny in this where you can laugh), the way he reacts to the warning for thieves in Gringots (the bank that he should open the safes and invite everyone to rob him). This fanfic has potential, but it needs to be rewritten.
22d
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BeastNaBh
BeastNaBhLv3

Just one word is all I need to speak of this fanfics excellence and that's "perfect". This fic DON'T need me to over glorify it's nature to others because it speaks for itself.

2mth

KuNaLsAmA
KuNaLsAmALv3

Started reading 'coz the cover pic of Hermione... But now hooked due to an interesting plot😅💀

2mth
Mindlessreader25
Mindlessreader25Lv12

I gotta say one of the best HP fanfic I have ever read ....

2mth
YoungMagister
YoungMagisterLv3

Damn! Finally, someone who understands the lore of HP books. Most of the fkers start writing fics just from watching the movies... This is great,

2mth
Matrhin
MatrhinLv15

A great read and if I saw this story sooner I’d given my stones to you.😅

2mth
Lucius_SS
Lucius_SSLv4

The chapters either consist of info dump, mc showing off, or very dry exploration of magical theory that can sometimes even leave plot holes, mc will most likely be showing off while doing so. Put simply, it's boring.

1mth
Yesnth
YesnthLv4

Y'know, I went into this expecting nothing. But damn did I get hooked. This story is one of the few that captivates you and pulls you in. It captures the feel of the Harry Potter books perfectly in how magical everything seems. Although this is a translated work, it does not change that it is a work that needs to be appreciated. The Writing quality, or better yet, translation quality is impeccable. you can't even tell its a translated work unless something really particular pops up. The story development is great. although hard to stick to in the first 10 chapters, when it gets rolling, oh it gets rolling. I couldn't even tell how fast I read through this and when I reached the end it left me craving for more. The Characters are very nicely interpreted. all of them capture the Essence of the originals and even the side characters feel like they're alive. although sometimes it may feel like the side characters glaze the Mc too much, that's just part of the fun and is framed as being perfectly logical. The updating stability is good. not much to say about it. There is a chapter every day. As for the World Background, this is literally the only Harry Potter fanfic I've read that takes many elements from the books too. Everyone else just watches the movies and calls it a day in terms of research. this is very well fletched out and the gaps in knowledge are allowed to be filled in by the author. all in all, 5/5. One of the best, if not the best fanfics, I've read on the platform. It simply draws you in and doesn't let go. would recommended.

1mth
abc_logan
abc_loganLv14

everything is good until harem tag and i really hating Hermione character and her simps with how these fics are portraying her. she is just a bookworm and thats it and these authors are glorifying it

2mth
MilkLover
MilkLoverLv3

A hard find [img=nervous]. It seems to be well thought and has a lot of potential 🔥🔥

2mth
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