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Andora_0002 days agoReplied to VirtuossoOn the contrary, it seemed unnatural to me from the first person. Or maybe I'm used to reading books where the narration is from a third point of view.
- Andora_0002 days agoReplied to Aditya_Rai_5059
No, 193 cm is too high. His height is fine as is. But if you change it, the best height will be about 185-187 cm.
- Andora_0002 days agoCommented
it will be better if you write the story from a third point of view
- Andora_0004 days agoReplied to kiby_kiby
Yes, already two days
- Andora_0004 days agoReplied to TehStorm
I didn't mean that he's not at their level. I meant that it would be too easy if he went to them. He's too young to go to Barca or Real Madrid. So he'll play in other clubs and go to Barca or Real Madrid. I think 25 would be ideal.
- Andora_0004 days agoReplied to TehStorm
Too early to go to Barca or Real Madrid. I think he can go to Juventus or Bayern. Play there for 2-3 years and he can go to Manchester City or Liverpool.
- Andora_0005 days agoCommented
when will there be a bonus chapter?
- Andora_0006 days agoCommented
Will there be a second chapter?
- Andora_0007 days agoReplied to Younes_l_Libourki
I didn't say I didn't like it. It just seems to me that the quality of the chapter has dropped. Have you read the chapter? I think I read the same thing twice
- Andora_0007 days agoCommented
why is everything repeating? The first half seems to be written by AI and the second half is slightly changed and repeats
