Andora_000

Yes, already two days

I didn't mean that he's not at their level. I meant that it would be too easy if he went to them. He's too young to go to Barca or Real Madrid. So he'll play in other clubs and go to Barca or Real Madrid. I think 25 would be ideal.

Too early to go to Barca or Real Madrid. I think he can go to Juventus or Bayern. Play there for 2-3 years and he can go to Manchester City or Liverpool.

when will there be a bonus chapter?

Will there be a second chapter?

I didn't say I didn't like it. It just seems to me that the quality of the chapter has dropped. Have you read the chapter? I think I read the same thing twice

why is everything repeating? The first half seems to be written by AI and the second half is slightly changed and repeats

It would have been better if you had replaced the "x" with "......." I think it improved the time skip. It's just a minor thing though. I'm looking forward to the bonus chapter.

Guys, more power stones. We need a bonus chapter.

it was possible to somehow find a way to increase the quality of the Laplace factor. Like in the original there are others with the Laplace factor, and somehow appropriate or absorb this factor. Well, or find a more realistic and logical method