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On the contrary, it seemed unnatural to me from the first person. Or maybe I'm used to reading books where the narration is from a third point of view.
No, 193 cm is too high. His height is fine as is. But if you change it, the best height will be about 185-187 cm.
it will be better if you write the story from a third point of view
Yes, already two days
I didn't mean that he's not at their level. I meant that it would be too easy if he went to them. He's too young to go to Barca or Real Madrid. So he'll play in other clubs and go to Barca or Real Madrid. I think 25 would be ideal.
Too early to go to Barca or Real Madrid. I think he can go to Juventus or Bayern. Play there for 2-3 years and he can go to Manchester City or Liverpool.
when will there be a bonus chapter?
Will there be a second chapter?
I didn't say I didn't like it. It just seems to me that the quality of the chapter has dropped. Have you read the chapter? I think I read the same thing twice
why is everything repeating? The first half seems to be written by AI and the second half is slightly changed and repeats