There's a lot of Diamond no Ace fics popping up lately and the best part is all of them have their own unique charm to them. This is also one of them Furuya has always been a character which is one step away from being too op of a character this fic has captured the essence of that very nicely. progression of story is good. overall highly recommended to those seeing this review.

t's good, but the MC's personality is becoming more and more like Furuya, so there's nothing special. [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]

This 'Diamond no Ace' fanfiction is an absolute gem! The writer captures the intensity of the sport with vivid detail, and the character development is spot on. A must-read that begs to be continued!

I've read a lot of fanfics out there and this is the first time I've come across that Furuya became the protagonist, I have a lot of expectations for this hope you could continue to upload more chalpter! Expect power stones from now on :))

I love it. The story is actually good and I should say that there is no boring chapter for me.This story may not be to everyone's liking, especially if you are not a fan of Furuya in the anime but you should give it a try, I am not a fan of Furuya, I don't hate him either. But, I find this story exciting, there are some fun chapters too, and the most important thing is Update Stability gosh with all the fanfic I came across with doesn't even have updates for YEARS. So this one is the best.

Another diamond no ace or ace of diamond fanfic. I’d say that first of all my review is bias. I’ve read two of the authors previous fanfics based on the same story. 1. The writing quality is quite good, you rarely see mistakes from the author. And if you do it’s never a mistake that will bring you out if the story. 2. Updating stability, the author has been very stable in his release for this ff. To be fair it’s hard to rate this as updating stability can change over time. 3. Story development, the author has definitely added his own charm to the story as well as is focused on the Mc. While many fanfic regarding Diamond no ace end up being a servant to sawamura or furuya. Or they completely disregard the two. Currently the author is focused on his mc. And this is something I like. It would be nice for the MC to suddenly be surprised by sawamura in the future. 4 character design, while he didn’t design most of the characters he has made full use of the known cast. I think over all in this subject he’s done a great job. As well as the Mc being quite interesting. 5. Works background, he’s done a good job so far. One note is when the scene changes he rarely ever describes the scene. While not necessary it can add a bit to each scene or our mental image. (Notice the last is mostly for non baseball scenes, while baseball scenes are typically described adequately) you could of course add information on shifting formations moving forwards back left or right but I feel most readers especially if they don’t know baseball may get confused if you do add it. I guess this suggestion is mostly for if you play a team that focuses on tactics, small ball ect.

Its pretty average, the characters feel way more small minded and everyone seems to have reduced intelligence.Also there is a lot of dumb face slapping going on. Literally everyone is like oh he missed the ball twice hes just a first year nothing special(even his own teamates!!!!!!) then bam homerun. Even more annoying is the random motivational speeches the MC gives every time they ask for his opinion, which is him saying cringeworthy stufff every time. So basically the story seems kind of depressing and you cant picture the characters actually saying the stuff they are saying

i haven't read it yet but i just wanted to be the 10th reviewer of this fanfic. I'll just edit it if I think its bad.....................................

Really enjoying this. Sure some maths errors here and there like getting innings number wrong etc but otherwise a fantastic FF. I really like that in this fic Seidou batters are actually decent and do score runs. Even with a new picther they might take innings or two to get used to it and bat in some runs which is good as in many FF's Seidou batters basically barely ever score at all which makes no sense as Seidou was keeping up with other schools even with them lacking proper dependable pitchers. They kept up with them with solid defense and high quality batting. Furuya makes for a entertaining SI since I do like his power style as all Eijun FF turn fic into overall technical mess and just keep levelling up their foes without any reason to nearly hug the canon.

Its a good fanfic but could be better.......................................... ..... .. .......... .............................................................................................