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Raptor2244
Raptor2244Lv148mth
2024-09-02 23:42

Everything is really great, including the translation quality, except for the actual MC. The dude is seriously off putting. He has no real personality and he just ignores anyone around him that says anything slightly troublesome. For example: Garp: hey kid who are you MC: stares at him in silence as if to convey some profound meaning Garp: Hey I asked who you were Mc: fifteen seconds of silence before he says "takumi" Garp:Are you here all alone MC: Ignores him Garp: Where did you get that wine Mc:ignores him Garp:want to join the marines Mc: ignores him for a minutes before saying no Garp: are you sure? Mc:ignores him There's just nothing interesting at all about an Mc who has no personality and acts like that. Don't get me wrong, not all of his conversations go like that, but a decent portion do. However besides that, I really can't complain. Mc isnt a crazy sociopath like most Chinese Mc and his goal is admirable.

One Piece: Starting by Refusing Shanks

Gered
4.1
367 Chs

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binah
binahLv4

people enjoy an mc like this

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Raptor2244
Raptor2244Lv14

Well I am not one of them and don't really see any point to a novel where the MC has 0 personality, but to each their own I suppose.

binah:people enjoy an mc like this
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Gered
GeredAuthor

Feel free to ask me anything, and I'll do my best to answer with what I know about this book. If you notice anything lacking in the quality of the novel, please let me know. I've tried to translate as free of Chinese elements as possible and have changed the Chinese names to fit One Piece characters. I'm always looking to improve, so if you spot any issues with the translation, I'd appreciate your feedback to help me enhance my skills. For this whole week, you'll receive chapters every two hours. I hope you'll support me so I can continue releasing two chapters every two hours next week as well.

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Knight_Noctis
Knight_NoctisLv4

From story to plot , everything is quite well written . But everything good with the story gets pretty much forgotten with the mc. He's not even a generic one. He's just a robot with no dreams or ambitions. His interactions are incredibly bland. And the system just slaves him around . That's another negative point of the story.

8mth
RedSaint
RedSaintLv11

well to be honest i found it really monotonous the mc only cares about alcohol and the sign-in also feel like he has no personality whatsoever and every character he meets tries to recruit him. besides those it is good if you don't have any other fanfic to read.

8mth
DecayedTree
DecayedTreeLv3

mc is like a depressed overpowerd teenager, and everyone around him acts as a conserned mom trying and failing to break him out of his depression. anyways good story, I hope it continues

8mth
DocAnubis
DocAnubisLv14

The translator is doing a good job at making the story more appetizing but it's soooo boring I have read a lot of Chinese fanfics but this one take the cake for the most monotone,boring,repeating story ever.whenever he goes to a new location all the npcs have the same dialog and reactions.

8mth
R0B
R0BLv2

This is really good. Mc is a traveller with a system. His system makes him interact with one piece characters to get rewards. In a way he is like Hawkeye - traveling alone and drinking alcohol (sake).

8mth
manolohard
manolohardLv1

O MC é praticamente um robô sem personalidade nenhuma e escravo do sistema,tudo se resume a ele viajando para fazer login e beber sem nenhum propósito real,simplesmente pq o sistema manda

8mth
Nicolas_Bahamondes
Nicolas_BahamondesLv2

The author does a good job with the writing and that is what hurts the most, the Chinese do not know how to make a good one piece plot, in short he is just a depressive child who one day woke up the system and began to obey. religiously, the protagonist has no charisma or self-esteem, he is just a robot that obeys the system, the interactions are so low and forced.

8mth
MarXox130
MarXox130Lv4

the translator is amazing but the history is trash Mc is complete apathetic have no goal or objective i don't know why such good translator is wasting his time with this kind of novel

8mth
adgjkzxc
adgjkzxcLv12

Heres how the story goes: MC gets to new island, signs in, power up, throw in a popular character, popular character gets surprised at his potential, tries to recruit him and gets rejected. Repeat. Same thing at least till chapter 40, repeated like 5 times. MC feels like an edgy teenager.

7mth
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