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Benoit_Valtin
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2024-09-02 07:03

I'll give a b for effort but in the end you can never write anything really well when working with artificial intelligence. The weird endings of sentences, the descriptions that don't mean much. These are all things that are wrong and which are unfortunately for me a hindrance to further reading. I still managed 12 chapters

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Anubis_Creationz
Anubis_CreationzLv4

Here's an idea. Just try your best and don't use AI. It will be honestly be better than this mess. I got to give you props though for being upfront about it. Your are at least better than those authors that try to pretend they aren't using it and then deleting comments of anyone saying they are using AI.

Benoit_Valtin
Benoit_ValtinLv11

write your opinion directly, to be able to vote for Anubis, AND START POSTING ZODIAC CHAPTERS AGAIN

Anubis_Creationz:Here's an idea. Just try your best and don't use AI. It will be honestly be better than this mess. I got to give you props though for being upfront about it. Your are at least better than those authors that try to pretend they aren't using it and then deleting comments of anyone saying they are using AI.
Tritonos
TritonosAuthor

Without ChatGPT I would never have written more than 3 chapters (see my first attempt where I wrote 100% everything by myself and only wrote 2 relatively decent chapters and was so unhappy that I didn't write for years). I have also read a lot of MTL novels and in my opinion most of them were almost unreadable compared to ChatGPT. but thank you for reading this far

Anubis_Creationz
Anubis_CreationzLv4

Sup. I remember you. I think you tried to commission me a few months ago to write a man with supowers in France or something. If I remember correctly. To be honest I've been thinking of getting back in the saddle and picking up where I left off with Zodiac and some of my other fics while I'm at it. So, let me ask you this question. Should I? a) Continue Zodiac ? b) Continue Zodiac + an old fic C) Start a new story d) Continue Zodiac + new fic (List of old fics : Altered Mind, Ultimate Cypher, The Heretic) (New Fic : The name is a secret, but hint, hint it's a very popular universe.)

Benoit_Valtin:write your opinion directly, to be able to vote for Anubis, AND START POSTING ZODIAC CHAPTERS AGAIN
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Tritonos
TritonosAuthor

The last 5 novels I read before I started writing this fanfic for fun included 2 of yours

Anubis_Creationz:Here's an idea. Just try your best and don't use AI. It will be honestly be better than this mess. I got to give you props though for being upfront about it. Your are at least better than those authors that try to pretend they aren't using it and then deleting comments of anyone saying they are using AI.
Anubis_Creationz
Anubis_CreationzLv4

You can use it if you want. Nobody is stopping you. Just use it wisely. A few tips to keep in mind. Give it a prompt to use ' simple day-to-day language' when you want it to rewrite something. You should also go over what it wrote and try remove any long winded explanation or description. (Hint : If you see more than 2 or 3 adjectives for every 3 lines than there are probably too many adjectives.) All of these things are relatively easy to fix. Just use your best judgment, you are trying to remove extra words and sentences and not add, which should make things a lot easier. Think of it as trimming all the fluff. You read a lot so, you probably have some idea of what things should look like. Like if you find the sentence looking like this. " He adopted a stance that exuded confidence and expertise. His movements were fluid, graceful yet powerful a testament to years of training and experience. " If you count them 👆 there are 5 adjectives total which for 2 sentences is a lot. 2 or 3 at most should be enough. Notice also the Verbs that are used do not sound natural and sound overly complicated. Like 'exuded' or 'adopted' instead more natural words or expressions like ' seemed confident or gave off the feeling of confidence' are better. Last thing to notice. Is that the sentence itself doesn't add anything new. Like, what's the point of saying he exuded confidence or similar nonsense? Does it add anything to the plot? Does it add anything to the character? No, it doesn't. A far better and natural and to the point sentence would be. " He took a stance and prepared to face his opponent and you could tell he was quite experienced due to his confident look." One last thing give Chatgpt the prompt to " Write the story using first person perspective and the main characters name is ' MC's namen" Since, it usually sounds better than 3rd person perspective. Anyways, hope this helps.

Tritonos:Without ChatGPT I would never have written more than 3 chapters (see my first attempt where I wrote 100% everything by myself and only wrote 2 relatively decent chapters and was so unhappy that I didn't write for years). I have also read a lot of MTL novels and in my opinion most of them were almost unreadable compared to ChatGPT. but thank you for reading this far
Anubis_Creationz
Anubis_CreationzLv4

Thanks buddy. Always happy to meet a reader! 👍

Tritonos:The last 5 novels I read before I started writing this fanfic for fun included 2 of yours
Benoit_Valtin
Benoit_ValtinLv11

sorry but I'm only zodiac with you, so as long as you take it back it's good for me, fanfiction on popular worlds, well who says popular says that there are already quite a few, what's the point. make an original story, at the risk of failing, or try a lesser known universe, or aging but with pep. like, reincarnated in breaking bad, or reincarnated in gta NOBODY HAS MADE A STORY OF MORE THAN 20 chapters on the game

Anubis_Creationz:Sup. I remember you. I think you tried to commission me a few months ago to write a man with supowers in France or something. If I remember correctly. To be honest I've been thinking of getting back in the saddle and picking up where I left off with Zodiac and some of my other fics while I'm at it. So, let me ask you this question. Should I? a) Continue Zodiac ? b) Continue Zodiac + an old fic C) Start a new story d) Continue Zodiac + new fic (List of old fics : Altered Mind, Ultimate Cypher, The Heretic) (New Fic : The name is a secret, but hint, hint it's a very popular universe.)
Anubis_Creationz
Anubis_CreationzLv4

Well the classics are the classics for a reason, they simply work. And, I could always use a popular universe and add a fresh perspective to it or put a twist to make it a bit more special. But, I see what you mean. The main issue with less popular universes is that, if the interest is too low it's easy to get demotivate as a writer. I have been dabbling with the idea of using powers from a lesser known universe in a more popular one. Though writing a completely original fic all together could prove to be an interesting challenge. Who knows? Maybe I'll give it a try one day. It's certainly on my bucketlist. Anyways I was just asking your opinion on general. I wonder what makes you more interested in Zodiac more than my other fics though? Is it because of the talismans or is it because it is in the DC world?

Benoit_Valtin:sorry but I'm only zodiac with you, so as long as you take it back it's good for me, fanfiction on popular worlds, well who says popular says that there are already quite a few, what's the point. make an original story, at the risk of failing, or try a lesser known universe, or aging but with pep. like, reincarnated in breaking bad, or reincarnated in gta NOBODY HAS MADE A STORY OF MORE THAN 20 chapters on the game
Anubis_Creationz
Anubis_CreationzLv4

BTW a couple of my favorite tc shows growing up were charmed and Smallville. The originals even though I watched when I was older also have a special place in my heart.

Benoit_Valtin:sorry but I'm only zodiac with you, so as long as you take it back it's good for me, fanfiction on popular worlds, well who says popular says that there are already quite a few, what's the point. make an original story, at the risk of failing, or try a lesser known universe, or aging but with pep. like, reincarnated in breaking bad, or reincarnated in gta NOBODY HAS MADE A STORY OF MORE THAN 20 chapters on the game
Benoit_Valtin
Benoit_ValtinLv11

it's sometimes horrible to read, but there is a mtl translated by "mutter" on a richard castle with a system and in a world shared with lots of small universes, john wick, fast and furious, White Collar lots of nice little universes not all so well known, but it works like a charm, I'm even going to resubscribe to his patreon in a few days, even if I spend my time criticizing the story because... the mtl authors often forget lots of details

Anubis_Creationz:BTW a couple of my favorite tc shows growing up were charmed and Smallville. The originals even though I watched when I was older also have a special place in my heart.
Tritonos
TritonosAuthor

Thanks for the info. I'll try to trim the unnecessary sentences in the newer chapters. (except the chapter ending [that positive and emotional attitude that chatgpt always adds at the end has grown on me])

Anubis_Creationz:You can use it if you want. Nobody is stopping you. Just use it wisely. A few tips to keep in mind. Give it a prompt to use ' simple day-to-day language' when you want it to rewrite something. You should also go over what it wrote and try remove any long winded explanation or description. (Hint : If you see more than 2 or 3 adjectives for every 3 lines than there are probably too many adjectives.) All of these things are relatively easy to fix. Just use your best judgment, you are trying to remove extra words and sentences and not add, which should make things a lot easier. Think of it as trimming all the fluff. You read a lot so, you probably have some idea of what things should look like. Like if you find the sentence looking like this. " He adopted a stance that exuded confidence and expertise. His movements were fluid, graceful yet powerful a testament to years of training and experience. " If you count them 👆 there are 5 adjectives total which for 2 sentences is a lot. 2 or 3 at most should be enough. Notice also the Verbs that are used do not sound natural and sound overly complicated. Like 'exuded' or 'adopted' instead more natural words or expressions like ' seemed confident or gave off the feeling of confidence' are better. Last thing to notice. Is that the sentence itself doesn't add anything new. Like, what's the point of saying he exuded confidence or similar nonsense? Does it add anything to the plot? Does it add anything to the character? No, it doesn't. A far better and natural and to the point sentence would be. " He took a stance and prepared to face his opponent and you could tell he was quite experienced due to his confident look." One last thing give Chatgpt the prompt to " Write the story using first person perspective and the main characters name is ' MC's namen" Since, it usually sounds better than 3rd person perspective. Anyways, hope this helps.
Tritonos
TritonosAuthor

In my opinion Zodiac has an additional nostalgic flair. Jackie Chan's talismans remind me of the series (I sound old but the series is better than anything I've seen in the last 10 years[outside Japan{One Punch Man}]). I liked your idea of ​​strengthening the MC like Chen Long with the talismans.

Anubis_Creationz:Thanks buddy. Always happy to meet a reader! 👍
Tritonos
TritonosAuthor

I imagine fanfic for Smallville would be very difficult, especially in the first few seasons. I have a stupid thought: a character from Harry Potter (a good person [maybe Sirius] {just has to know the magic}) ends up in the cornfield in Smallville in the first episode where Klark is hanging on the cross. If we pursue the idea further: Klark looks like a healthy Charls Potter, only younger. Sirius doesn't feel very well in his head for the first few months (due to the death portal he crossed) and thinks that Charles has lost his memories and not Sirius. Sirius thinks that Klark has superpowers and can't do magic because he messed up a ritual and is now something similar to a vampire (in Harry Potter, vampires can only have blood magic, even if they were previously normal magicians before they were turned into vampires)

Anubis_Creationz:BTW a couple of my favorite tc shows growing up were charmed and Smallville. The originals even though I watched when I was older also have a special place in my heart.
Anubis_Creationz
Anubis_CreationzLv4

Certainly an interesting premise but I think the misunderstanding would be even more great if Siruis kidnaps Clark and tries to restore his memories and actually ends up messing things up even further.

Tritonos:I imagine fanfic for Smallville would be very difficult, especially in the first few seasons. I have a stupid thought: a character from Harry Potter (a good person [maybe Sirius] {just has to know the magic}) ends up in the cornfield in Smallville in the first episode where Klark is hanging on the cross. If we pursue the idea further: Klark looks like a healthy Charls Potter, only younger. Sirius doesn't feel very well in his head for the first few months (due to the death portal he crossed) and thinks that Charles has lost his memories and not Sirius. Sirius thinks that Klark has superpowers and can't do magic because he messed up a ritual and is now something similar to a vampire (in Harry Potter, vampires can only have blood magic, even if they were previously normal magicians before they were turned into vampires)
DaoOfNaps
DaoOfNapsLv4

will you ever update ultimate cypher

Anubis_Creationz:Certainly an interesting premise but I think the misunderstanding would be even more great if Siruis kidnaps Clark and tries to restore his memories and actually ends up messing things up even further.
Tritonos
TritonosAuthor

oh yes

Anubis_Creationz:Certainly an interesting premise but I think the misunderstanding would be even more great if Siruis kidnaps Clark and tries to restore his memories and actually ends up messing things up even further.
Anubis_Creationz
Anubis_CreationzLv4

I haven't completely given up on it and plan on finishing it, but I don't think it will be anytime soon.

DaoOfNaps:will you ever update ultimate cypher
Tritonos
TritonosAuthor

Hey, I've now tried a new novel: MARVEL loner wants peace for his hobby’s I'm trying not to sound so AI strong anymore

Anubis_Creationz:Here's an idea. Just try your best and don't use AI. It will be honestly be better than this mess. I got to give you props though for being upfront about it. Your are at least better than those authors that try to pretend they aren't using it and then deleting comments of anyone saying they are using AI.
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