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SAURON_Lv22mth
2024-09-22 10:03

Honestly really great so far only complains are how short they are and how spaced the updates are also please have him get oozaru contained in his regular form like broly also is mc like z broly or super broly but with super broly power also maybe have it so that he can combine some of his skills to make a new skill but at a risk of them either going a lower level or combining to make a better skill like strike + critical strike = critical blow blow is a stronger version of strike strike blow smash pound slam yeah i know all the same definition but each is a different grade of strike and honestly it would help after all he has ki attacks and regular strikes but no heavy hitting physical attacks so far

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Qwerttipper
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Love the idea, but I don't like the execution. the protagonist is not using his resources and not giving his all either. He is constantly just going with the flow. the only time he trained seriously was when Asia, the dB version of the Dxd priest, gets injured. He doesn't mention having any bottlenecks and keeps on improving, so it is unbelievable that he would seriously train only once. He got 50 times stronger by inefficient training in one night if he trained more effectively and under more constraints (ex more gravity, less mobility, more weighted vest, depleted ki, extreme temperatures, etc). I could only imagine how strong he would get, and if the author wants him to barely survive each time, you can just have him namekian regeneration instead of lssj potential. Anyways, fun story, but not for me. Keep up the good work.

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Milk_Hunter
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It has been a long while since a Dragon Ball story has me getting all excited! Especially with how powerful everyone has become and the canon is in chaos. I can't wait for Gray's future adventures, like fighting Turtles to take the seeds of the Tree of Might for himself. As for his current situation, I bet Dr. Gero has already made the lesser Android models and is in the process of creating 17 and 18. I'm excited to see what crazy ideas you have for the future, Author! Keep doing a fantastic job!

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Seth_Rune
Seth_RuneLv4

Like the concept, but why a harem man WHYYYYYYY 😭 THEY CANT KEEP GETTING AWAY WITH THIS!!!

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mercurystarship_1487
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This fic isn’t really about DBZ, but that’s not a bad thing. It brings a fresh twist, even if it strays pretty far from the original. The writing is better than a lot of the trash you see on Webnovel, but it’s still pretty average. The main issue is the MC—he often comes off as a moron and mostly thinks with his hormones. The author’s Pokémon-style harem adds to the trashy vibe. Some other problems can be brushed off, but this one’s hard to ignore. The idea is interesting, but it definitely needs some work. (Note: The language has been toned down using AI because Webnovel wouldn't accept the original review.)

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FringGustavo
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great dragon ball story . Everyone is a lot stronger, but that's OK. The only downfall is that it's harem, and as such, it just feels like every girl he meets is a glorified fleshlight(i expect nothing less from harem stories)

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XCore
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the concept is very interesting, i hope the author doesn't drop this novel .

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Qielin
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A very nice take on a nightmare level dragon ball z reincarnation. Keep up with the good work author.

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Praise_TheSun
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So far very good has great potential would be great if we would have images for the girls [img=update][img=update]🔥🔥

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theres only a few chapters up right now but I really like the story so far. The MC is pretty good and the concept is good. I like the saiyan academy a lot. I also like the harem a lot. I think it's really cool how Asia is a saiyan here. Please keep writing this story I like it a lot

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