Love the idea, but I don't like the execution. the protagonist is not using his resources and not giving his all either. He is constantly just going with the flow. the only time he trained seriously was when Asia, the dB version of the Dxd priest, gets injured. He doesn't mention having any bottlenecks and keeps on improving, so it is unbelievable that he would seriously train only once. He got 50 times stronger by inefficient training in one night if he trained more effectively and under more constraints (ex more gravity, less mobility, more weighted vest, depleted ki, extreme temperatures, etc). I could only imagine how strong he would get, and if the author wants him to barely survive each time, you can just have him namekian regeneration instead of lssj potential. Anyways, fun story, but not for me. Keep up the good work.
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